Reviews by Ariana

Of Legolas and Luthien · Thu Apr 09, 2009 12:32 am

I have just stumbled upon this amazing story. You have tremendous talent!

Are you planning to continue with it?

Are you the same Amelie who authored "Femme Fatale"? Would love to read that one again. Do you have it archived?

Thanks!

Ariana

The Bond · Fri Feb 02, 2007 12:10 am

Where does one begin? This is such a beautifully woven, enchanting tale of eternal love. I have enjoyed every minute. Your attention to detail is inspired; your voice a lovely tribute to Tolkien lore.

Suggestions:
Watch for some of the more subtle grammar and spelling issues that can be a distraction.
The fourteen year separation seemed a bit excessive, breaking some of the continuity you had so eloquently built throughout the preceding chapters.

Wonderful story... Bravo! When do we get to see the encore?

Thank you for sharing your lovely creation...

Ariana

The World that Was · Tue Jan 30, 2007 11:16 am

This piece is so lovely. It is amazing how Terri and Viv can leave the reader anticipating with breathlessness, heart racing, always wanting more...

It has been some time. I do hope you will one day share more of this beautiful story!

Mel

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