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Bloodlines - The Beginning (PG)
by Ixladra.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Warnings [Canon tinkering]
Fri Aug 24, 2007 10:15 am
Aha, now this is an exciting premise! Just a few notes on spelling etc: think it should be "nigh on" instead of "neigh" in the paragraph about separating Haldir from his brothers and... there was something else but I seem to have forgotten what it was! Never mind, it didn't detract from the storytelling. I'm excited to read on.
 
 
Secrets (G)
by Khamul.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [15]
Fri Jun 08, 2007 7:42 am
Fantastic! A lovely balance of dramatic build up and comedy.
 
 
Two Words (PG)
by sivan.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [2]
Warnings [AU. Angst, emotional feelings on the line. Tissues]
Fri Jun 08, 2007 7:40 am
Beautiful intentions but the shifting of tenses mid-sentence let you down.
 
 
Ships Passing (PG)
by Marta.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [2]
Warnings [reference to sexual situations; adult themes]
Sun May 27, 2007 11:28 am
Both beautiful in language and intent. The frame of the poem and the speech lapsing into thought is skilfully done, the scene came alive before my eyes as I heard his words in my head.
 
 
Tales of the Hunter (G)
by ErinRua.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [5]
Sun May 13, 2007 7:45 am
I really appreciated the structural thought that must have gone into this tale, the way the subtle differences in the motif of the bedside scene reflected the passing of the years and set the mood of each part from the very first word.
A touching framing story too!