Reviews by ZeeDrippyVessel

Tel' Lindar (The Bard) · Fri Nov 14, 2003 10:46 am

BellemaineChercoeur said
> I have an inkling of what a future twist may be, but won't say just in case I taint a surprise or amke you go "huh????!!!"

Hmmmm - what IS your inkling??? Email me at ZeDrippyVessel@aol.com and tell me. Even if your wrong, you might set off a bunny.

That's how armor removal with teeth got started....

Thanks everyone for reading this silliness. Don't give up on Haldir yet - - he has plenty to say about all this!!!!

Zee

Scattered Leaves · Sun Nov 02, 2003 2:12 am

This is exquisite. Beautifully, lyrically done. It is artful, tasteful. I feel for Frodo in this. Simply an awesome job!
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Joinings · Mon Oct 20, 2003 7:51 pm

This was a very sweet read. Very Happy smiley face

. I truly enjoyed Legolas' teen-aged angst of the opposite sex and the betrothed couples anxiousness to "get the stuff over with" so they could get on with other pleasures.

Very nice.

Zee

The Empty Vessel · Tue Oct 14, 2003 11:26 am

OH! I forgot!!! Laughing smiley face

There is a TRANSITION MisAdventure. I will be posting it next week and it's a ***GASP*** songfic (sorry) called "Strokin'.

Just let your widdle imaginations run wild.. Twisted Evil smiley face

(AM still awed by the feedback I've gotten from this...)

The Empty Vessel · Mon Oct 13, 2003 5:04 pm

Mayrand said
> I do hope it´s not really finished!

First off - Thank you, thank you very much! (Elvis has now left the building!)

This is the end of the Empty Vessel. There MIGHT be a few more MisAdventures posted, I'm not sure. For some reason, I have a bunny concerning Faeowynne and her loves and there has been another little humorour bunny tenetively titled '3 Elves and a Elfling.' T

here is a sequel and it will be posted in the CrossOver Section. It is called Tel' Lindar (The Bard) and is a crossover to Harry Potter's World. So far, I have dry ran it at a HP site and the reviews so far have been favorable.

Tenentive launch for Tel' Lindar is October 31st, 2003. In the meantime, I am catching up on much needed sleep and catching up on reading...

Thanks you!

Zee

Fortress · Wed Jul 16, 2003 11:55 pm

Isn't that neat? For several weeks the feedback I had been getting was "Goooo Bronny! Alright Bronny! Bronny this...Bronny that." For the longest time, I have been afraid Bronny is upstaging our hero and she has become the powerful one.
This is not the case. There is so much more to their relationship and the bottom line was she didn't choose to take on the responsibility for the Valar or for the future - she took it on because she loved him,. Even tho at the time, she didn't know how he felt about her - or even was sure of her own feelings - she definitely wanted to explore them, And when it is over, she will follow him again, They are helping the other fulfill each other's destiny. They are filling the other. Very deep and very complex and I was afraid people were missing it. She isn't all powerful and she isn't bigger or badder the he. They are 2 equal partners with different abilities that work together. This particular vignette will fit in well with the 20th chapter. Their relationship is more than just sex and it is more than him following her around on tour. There is a definite partnership there. And the depth and the intensify of that partnership is going to be rung through the fire and pulled in many direction when the sequel comes around.

Thank you for reading.
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The Empty Vessel · Sun Jul 13, 2003 11:43 am

Hathor said
My one teeny nitpick is referring to what looks like typing errors- there's a couple of missing ounctuations dotted around. But that doesn't actually detract from the fic. It's only Grammer Nazi's like me who would pick up on it anyway.
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> And now I'm just waiting for the next chapter! Very Happy smiley face

Hello and thank you for your kind words. I keep TWO betas - who are English teachers - very busy between this fic and my crossover sequel. They scream because I can't puntuate my way out of a paper bag -specifically, commas(I am a musician -we use comma'sas breath marks!) and also, my eyesite isn't the greatest. The only way i can tell the difference between a " and a ' is to explode the font to 20 and read with a fine tooth comb. Shocked smiley face

Sometimes I catch 'em, soemtimes not. Usually not. Surprised smiley face

ops:
Armor Removal with teeth commencing first thing Monday Morning! Have your towels ready! Twisted Evil smiley face

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The Empty Vessel · Fri Jul 11, 2003 6:26 pm

Z! Whaddya mean, going to FL - I have to wait until after next Tues for the removal of the armor chapter???
> OOH - you are a tease!

Nah - That for when I originally posted it back around Mother's Day. Armor Removal will commence Monday Morning! Very Happy smiley face

Payback is Hell · Fri Jul 04, 2003 10:16 pm

Viv said
> This was a lot of fun. I have to admit I haven't been able to get into the Empty Vessel... first several chapters are just a little confusing. But these characters are just so amusing... I may have to go back and try again.

Please try again. The first couple of chapters confused me and I WROTE the thing! The whole issue of who and what she is is eventually explained in VIVD and excrutiating detail!

> If I had to offer a constructive criticism, it'd be more in the way of a personal preference: song fics rarely work. Sometimes inserting lyrics works, but most times folks just skip over them, and the rhythm of the story is interrupted whilst they skip. I think the kinky sex here would be just fine without the song lyrics.

This is not a song fic. The music mentioned - is heard. She creates it and uses it in many forms for various things. Again, this is explained as you go. And as Garotin said - this is her, sharing her world, her time, with Middle Earth. Also,as a professional musician - the lyrics, the music sets the tone for me and propels what is going on.
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> But all in all: real nice. Thanks for providing smut inspiration for the evening. And can I borrow Rumil? I have a thing or two for him to sketch Wink smiley face

Rumil is pretty amazing - isn't he? (I'm fond of him myself!)

Thanks
Zee

Use me once · Sat Jun 07, 2003 12:54 am

Thank you Nothing2Sweet for the Kind Words in your review AND the personal Email. :blush: As a professional musician for most of the past 20 years, I have developed a pretty thick skin. Granted, I haven't been writing as long as most people, but I stand by the quality of my work. I learned a long time ago that you can't please all the people, all the time and as I keep EVERY piece of review I get (yes - including THAT one) I stacked it up this way: 4 pieces since mid - march (including 1 that so far is 17 chapters) and a total of 294 single reviews. 292 - great, 1 - I love it, but I had one small issue with this... (and then gave me an adult reason why.) and 1 - ulk. So you can guess what I think of her opinion! Roll Eyes smiley face

Also - I am posted on no less than 15 websites and I was invited to post on this one.

The beta for this piece was well known to be brutal on bad fic. She adored tearing writers and pieces to shreds and as she did not do this to this piece, I am comfortable in standing behind it as is. It is incomplete, there will be a followup in a future chapter of The Empty Vessel.

Last - thank God - in response to the comment about my supposed reluctance to post this as is - I asked for Constructive Criticism NOT because I was worried for the quality, but because it was the mature thing to do.

Zee

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