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'Til Death Do Us Part (PG-13)
by Haleth.
Chapters [46]
Reviews [ 55]
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Tue Nov 08, 2011 9:03 pm
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| Yeah another chapter! Poor Haleth is still so confused and her memories still jumbled. I wonder how Haleth knows Angrod. This should be quite interesting. And what is happening to Inglor? Clear more diffuse light? Could he be fading? |
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| Author's replied on Wed Dec 28, 2011 9:59 pm |
Haleth is a complete mess, moreso than usual. She can't figure out if these 'memories' that are returning are real, imaginary or just wishful thinking. I wouldn't want to be in her shoes.
Inglor doesn't seem to be fairing much better. He probably thought he was doing her a favour but she doesn't seem to appreciate it in the least!
Thank-you for reviewing. |
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'Til Death Do Us Part (PG-13)
by Haleth.
Chapters [46]
Reviews [ 55]
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Wed Apr 06, 2011 7:51 pm
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| Wow, a great story with even more surprises. I wonder how she will handle having the life of an immortal elf. Leave it to a man or in this case an elf to not say his feeling aloud. "building a ship to take US indeed!" |
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| Author's replied on Sat Apr 16, 2011 6:35 am |
Inglor probably thought his actions were perfectly clear and needed no explanation. He make many assumptions along those lines. So does Haleth, although her assumptions are easier to understand because we often see what's going on in her head.
Thank-you for reviewing.
Haleth |
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For Small Returns (R)
by curiouswombat.
Chapters [10]
Reviews [ 11]
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Sat Jan 15, 2011 5:57 pm
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| A very delightful and entertaining tale. I would love to see it develop further, for it would be fun to hear about the Gondorian reactions. I also envision a 'girls' night of the ellith humorously comparing their thoughts. A 'shield' for Legolas! |
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| Author's replied on Sat Jan 15, 2011 6:30 pm |
| Thank you - I think I might well be tempted to write a bit more of this... |
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Invictus (R)
by TheLadyofLight.
Chapters [8]
Reviews [ 5] Warnings [Violence, adult themes]
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Mon May 17, 2010 6:35 am
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| An excellent beginning to a very difficult time in one families' life. That Celebrian even survived such an attack speaks of her own strength. I like the allusions to others who have held her heart over so many thousands of years. Of course one would recall the good memories to try to ward off the horrible ones. You paint an amazing picture where she so obviously loves Elrohir, but there are so many other factors. 'look forward to more. |
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Carefully Taught (PG-13)
by Senta.
Chapters [22]
Reviews [ 3] Warnings [none]
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Sat May 08, 2010 12:57 pm
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| What and unexpected and intriguing tale. I like the learned dragon. Is he really to be trusted? I wonder who his rider is, who could be searching for Elessar? I look forward to more. |
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| Author's replied on Mon May 24, 2010 5:00 am |
| Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm delighted that you are reading and finding the story interesting. All will gradually be revealed! |
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The Golden Queen (R)
by Malinwen.
Chapters [31]
Reviews [ 16] Warnings [rated R for later chapters]
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Sun May 02, 2010 4:00 pm
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| Beautiful! A fitting wedding for a royal pair.! |
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| Author's replied on Mon May 03, 2010 1:26 am |
Thank you!  |
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The Sell-sword and the Prince. (PG-13)
by LadyBluejay.
Chapters [16]
Reviews [ 31]
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Mon Feb 22, 2010 6:12 pm
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| Wow, super description of the mission! Chapters 6 &7 were wonderful. So, he finally won over Imrahil but now the Prince doesn't understand why he would just desert everyone and leave Gondor. Look forward to the explanation. Will you end up with Imrahil meeting Aragorn on the fields of Pelennor? It would be cool to glimpse his first thoughts. |
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| Author's replied on Fri Feb 26, 2010 10:26 am |
| Thomas for the nice words. I had not originally intended to write the scene on the Pelennor but having had a few nudges I decided to do that - even though it pushes the romance back a chapter! LBJ |
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The Return of the King (PG-13)
by Jael.
Chapters [2]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [Mild sexual content implied]
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Sat Feb 13, 2010 5:12 pm
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| What a terrific start! How difficult it must have been for Thranduil to return in the manner that he did - just 1/3 of their warriors and the King, who had led them for much of an age now gone and to top it all off - the burden of taking up the crown. I think you do a wonderful job spinning the tale - and I look forward to more as Thranduil struggles to unite and a splintered group of forest elves. |
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The Sell-sword and the Prince. (PG-13)
by LadyBluejay.
Chapters [16]
Reviews [ 31]
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Tue Feb 02, 2010 5:24 pm
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| Awesome chapter! Now the small group of boys and the woman are safely aboard, its time to move on to their real goal of destroying those ships. I liked the back and forth discussion as the idea was put forward for helping free the slaves in the port - how will the plan evolve and how will it play out with their other goal in mind? Can't wait to see it happen! |
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| Author's replied on Wed Feb 03, 2010 2:38 pm |
| Well, there are bound to be a few problems, that's what makes it interesting.LBJ |
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Interrupted Journeys: Journeys Out of Grief (PG)
by ellisk.
Chapters [8]
Reviews [ 5] Warnings [none]
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Mon Feb 01, 2010 9:35 am
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| Wow, your dialogue is really thought provoking and very well done. Any reasonable parent might have done similarly when confronted with just the cousin's injury and Glílavan's words.... and yet, that has not been how Thranduil has tried to conduct himself as either King or Father. I like how his wife and Mother confront him on this - and on the fact of how grief (not to speak of stress) can change one's normal reactions. Legolas' thoughts, spewed out in anger were so deep, believable and well thought out - it left me speechless! Thranduil was speechless as well as he tried to get his mind around how fear and grief influenced the thoughts and actions of his son and nephew. Amazing chapter! |
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| Author's replied on Tue Feb 02, 2010 6:21 pm |
| I am so glad the arguments Legolas and Thranduil make here come across well for you. And Thranduil not being his best given the circumstances. It is difficult for me when writing characters out-of-character, but for (hopefully) good reasons. You are never sure you pulled it off. So, I'm very pleased to see it worked for you! This review made my day! Thanks so much! |
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