Reviews by Sulriel

The Touch of His Hand · Tue Sep 05, 2006 1:03 pm

This is very nicely done. I like the theme of his hands throughout and switching to her hands at the end.

The Blind and Buttonless Horseman · Wed Aug 30, 2006 10:36 pm

LOL!!! What a fun story! I can't wait to see the rest of it!

Leavetaking · Thu Aug 17, 2006 4:24 pm

This is nice Nancy. I like how it conveys his emotion, both melancholy at leaving and eagerness to be on his way.

Secrets · Tue Aug 15, 2006 7:52 am

HAHAHAHHA!! Good one! I agree with Neume, I didn't see it coming. Great atmosphere and twist at the end. Smile smiley face

Lim Aear · Sun Aug 06, 2006 8:50 pm

Glad to see this coming along. Keep up the good work. Smile smiley face

Rest and Recreation · Wed Aug 02, 2006 9:12 pm

What a fun story - fun to read and fun to imagine. Smile smiley face

Mists of time · Wed Aug 02, 2006 9:05 pm

Your writing is evocative. I can well imagine those thoughts going through Legolas' mind during that time.

Time · Sat Jul 22, 2006 1:26 pm

Interesting concept - an 'immortal' having to learn the concept of passing time - of enroaching death.

I've always played with timelessness being an Elvish quality - one might say "I'll be right back" and you won't see them again for 30 years. Smile smiley face

I like this drabble of Arwen trying to grasp the concept, especially the line comparing it to water running through her fingers.

In the Shadows · Wed Jul 19, 2006 2:45 pm

I find this to be very grim. Not really to my taste, but well-enough written and I can see a lot of consideration has gone into the various points and I always apprecaite that.

Lim Aear · Tue Jul 18, 2006 1:55 pm

This seems to be a good start. Gandalf - I presume - Smile smiley face

and the little girl is delightful. I'll be interested to see where you go with this.

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