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The Prince and the Librarian (PG)
by Sazziel.
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Sun Feb 05, 2006 9:53 am
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I am enjoying following this, especially your growing conflict with the lords in the council.
- as a side note. It's difficult to read without white space breaking the paragraphs, it tends to tire the eye of the reader (especially us old folks  ) It'd help your readibility if you'd put that extra line in. feel free to contact me privately if you'd like help with the formatting.
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Hands of Healing (PG-13)
by Cuthalion.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 7] Warnings [none]
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Sat Jan 28, 2006 10:22 pm
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This really is wonderful. I have to highlight a few of my favorite lines.
>soft syllables, shining in the dim light of the stables like pearls on a chain, a singing murmur, a tender caress, made of words
>I’ve heard of the magic of elves, but I didn’t look for it in a ranger from the north
>something in him, something great, something ancient and noble...
You capture a great deal of intensity that hits hard in certain lines, it is that part of your style that I enjoy so much in your writing, but this story flows especially well. |
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Rangers (G)
by rohanion.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 11] Warnings [none]
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Wed Jan 25, 2006 12:33 pm
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| I've read this a couple of times and tried to think of something insightful to say in this review, but I'll have to settle for agreeing with those who have posted above. Heartbreaking and powerful. well-done. |
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Cravings (PG)
by WinterTouched.
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Wed Jan 25, 2006 12:29 pm
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| LOL! delightfully OOC! - what fun to think that the great king and his fabulous Elven queen are indeed not so different than the rest of us. |
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Weapons of the Enemy (PG)
by NancyandAnna.
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Thu Jan 19, 2006 5:41 pm
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I'm sure I have reviewed this before, but obviously - not here (...?) maybe somewhere else  Apologies if I read and didn't review, - I especially enjoy this, it's one of my favorites and I've recommened to several other readers. I especially enjoy the characterizations and the interaction between Sam and Glorfindel. |
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So it begins (G)
by Vilwarin.
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Thu Jan 19, 2006 3:44 pm
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| Very nice - I like the short, stark ceremony. It seems in-keeping with Ranger character. Simple and to the point. |
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Brothers at Heart (PG-13)
by Radbooks.
Chapters [26]
Reviews [ 27] Warnings [None]
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Thu Jan 19, 2006 8:30 am
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| You have a lovely start here. I'm enjoying your characterizations, Aragorn's young nobility and his strength in spite of his uncertainty - and the bits of conflict that are arising. |
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Before I go to sleep - Miniatures (R)
by Cuthalion.
Chapters [4]
Reviews [ 3] Warnings [decent mentioning of adult moments]
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Tue Jan 17, 2006 12:57 pm
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| These are, as I've come to expect from you, tightly written and intensely emotional. The way you switch between love, passion, loss, pain and terror is amazing to me. |
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Hope for the Suffering (PG-13)
by raelynn48601.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 3] Warnings [None]
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Sat Jan 14, 2006 2:19 pm
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| I'm not familiar with the challenge you listed, but this is a lovely Christmas tale of loss and renewal. It's nice to think that such sacrifice would be rewarded with restoration. |
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The Gift (PG)
by Jael.
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Fri Jan 13, 2006 12:59 pm
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I have to say I can't remember reading this pairing before and I wasn't sure how well it could be done, but I thought you did a wonderful job with it.
also - you subtly touched on something that I'm curious about - That while men go beyond the circles of the world when they die, -Elves have the lifespan of Arda, - but when Arda ends ... do they join with Illuvatar (and the Men) at that time? It's said that is their hope.
At that time, when they faced each other, would Arathorn and Legolas be able to accept each other's love and care of Gilraen while the other was unable to be with her? |
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