Reviews by Viv

Beyond Adversity · Sat Mar 13, 2004 7:49 pm

hee. Okay, now for a *real* review. I remain of the opinion that Cindar is a lovely character so far. So wise, for one so young. I want to braid his hair all afternoon and listen to him chatter. In the mean time, I'll settle for some more of this story, if you please. Smile smiley face

Beyond Adversity · Sat Mar 13, 2004 7:47 pm

Cindar's hot.

The Cursed Queen of Angmar · Fri Mar 05, 2004 1:49 pm

Chp. 44 was a relief. Not wholly unexpected, but a relief just the same. I can't wait to see the ghost army in action. Smile smiley face

Future's Hope - Tale 2 : The Glorfindel Chronicles · Thu Mar 04, 2004 5:43 pm

I love your reason for Glorfindel's return: that he couldn't bear an eternity of watching Idril and Tuor in their bliss. *romantic sigh* And that action scene, though short, was nicely done. This sentence was lovely: "The deadly dance he wove kept him ducking and weaving through the throng, until the world fell away and all that existed was himself, his weapon and his enemy." Sounds very eastern (aikido-esque, even). Smile smiley face

And I won't spoil it for folks who haven't read, but the identity of the woman he saves in the forest... YES. (AS an aside: It looks like a personal note survived your edit: "As he looked into fearless gun metal (they don#t have guns) grey eyes"). This story is fantastic so far. Yay, you're writing lotrfic!! (sorry, should contain my glee. lol)

Comfort · Thu Feb 26, 2004 4:55 pm

Well, I'm glad he's comfortable, 'cause I'm sure not! Need warning on this one, folks: Do not read at work. Shocked smiley face

At any rate, this was one of the finest smut biscuits I've read, and better still because it featured nekkidLeggy, which is always a happy thing. The POV experiment worked astonishingly well. I admit to some trepidation when I read about it in the AN at the beginning, but it was perfect for this sort of scene. Very clever decision, and very well executed. You both get cookies (lembas ones, even. with icing).

The Invasion of Aragorn · Thu Feb 26, 2004 4:37 pm

Very interesting beginning. I know, I've felt the same way. Almost impossible to read/write a fic without having the beautiful one Lego waltz in for no good reason. Likewise with the King of Gondor etc. Can't wait to see where you take us with this story.

Forgotten Allies · Wed Feb 25, 2004 3:48 pm

Well, I finally read it, and I'll recommend it to anyone who will listen. But I don't know how I'll dare to write AU lotrfic after reading that. I'm just... overwhelmed. No crits, no specifics. Just awe.

Rose in the King's Garden · Wed Feb 25, 2004 2:19 pm

I know this was all about Thranduil's past with Rose, and the sort of tragic love and stuff (all beautifully written and evocative). But I can't get hot-oiled Thrandy out of my mind. Is that bad?

Taur Ingem · Thu Feb 19, 2004 4:01 pm

I just love drabbles Smile smiley face

You completely caught the confusion of such a moment, and I loved the bit at the end, concerning his own mortality and the fate he sees for his father. This is a study not just on Theoden, but on all mortals, and on mortal kings especially. Finally, you know me, so of course I have a smidgy nitpick: you may want to change "site" to "sight." Smile smiley face

Iadel · Thu Feb 05, 2004 1:17 pm

KhazarKhum said
> Rumplestiltskin meets Feanor---hmmm. I think I'd bet on Feanor.

Kind of makes me think Celebrity Death Match. Wink smiley face

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