Reviews by ellisk

Spring Fling · Mon Aug 15, 2005 4:12 pm

Outstanding! I loved it. Melian and Luthien! But not at the same time as if that makes it better. But the last one tells it all, doesn't it! Again, I loved it! Thanks for adding!

Paradox of the Fourth Age · Sun Jul 31, 2005 3:29 pm

There is so much to this story and this line is just one example: One slim gold band was all that would remain of this day. Just as one band of gold was the reason she was returning. I love that. There is so much meaning and emotion tied up in that one line. I also loved the fact that this chapter starts with the birth of Laureanna and ends with her loss/a sort of rebirth. I really liked her entrance into Middle Earth. Scary!

And the angst! We have already talked about how I love the angst! Great chapter--now write the next one fast because now that she is in M-e, I am dying to know what happens next.

The Heart of Lamedon · Sat Jul 30, 2005 8:56 am

I really liked this--you portrayed Angbor's strength perfectly. I thought this was a very powerful drabble.

Mortality · Sat Jul 16, 2005 12:36 pm

Well done. Smile smiley face

Board Games (Cinquain) · Sat Jul 16, 2005 12:35 pm

That's cool. I remember these from school. I liked it.

Paradox of the Fourth Age · Wed Jul 13, 2005 8:22 pm

You know, the 'smut' scene in this is so passionate and sweet when I re-read it after re-reading These boots.... It just goes to show what a great range of skill you have in the fine art of writing delicious smut. Smile smiley face

But I love this whole chapter, not just the smut. The flashback is just too sad..."she'll never be in ME..." well, she was wrong there! And it's a really scary flashback given what we know is going to happen.

And all the angst caused by her departure, worrying about her in ME, worrying about what will happen if she survives...there just is nothing good for them to wish for here. I particularly like the conversation with Thranduil's wife. Great chapter! I am sooo sorry to be so far behind in reviews. Surprised smiley face

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Soul's Journey · Wed Jul 13, 2005 8:13 pm

Sorry, I downloaded and read the last two parts--I'm just way behind in reviews....

I really liked the part in Lorien--I can't think of any canon justification for it (memory is just not that good), but I always thought the strangest part of the journey for Boromir had to be Lorien. I really liked this line: In this strange land every thing – the very air! – has its voice. and the part that followed it. I thought it conveyed really well the sort of smothered feeling he had in that very foreign environment.

And the last part--that was very ironic! Little did he know how close he was to the end of the journey. But in the end, he did fulfill his responsibilities to Gondor--he died with honor and Gondor was saved. Without his contributions to the Quest, it might not have been.

I enjoyed this series of drabble very much, NB. Thank for the peek into B's head. Smile smiley face

The Trees Remember · Wed Jul 13, 2005 8:05 pm

Sorry. I have been reading, I just have been having to download and read fast because I've been buried, so I've been bad about reviews...

I love the back story that you have put in these last to chapters. Elaneth is more and more interesting--even when you reveal details, you build more mystery. And I can't believe you left us hanging on Legolas and the twins until this last chapter! That was sooo mean. Now that they are splitting up, I think I am even more worried about them. I am just dying to know where all this is going.

Walls With Ears · Fri Jul 08, 2005 6:11 am

I think it's very funny--the type of things brothers and sisters might joke about. I wonder if Eowyn is old enough to understand the innuendo. It seems not since she thinks about Eomer pulling her hair. I think this was very cute.

A Betrothal And Wedding · Sun Jul 03, 2005 11:36 am

I really enjoyed these. I don't think I have ever read anything about Eärwen's courtship or marriage. I thought the language was wonderful and the story very sweet. Great job!

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