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Sleep Well My Love (G)
by Laiquendi.
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Sun Jun 26, 2005 2:33 pm
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| Well done. Arwen's feelings about the choice she had made when finally faced with the reality of it must have been very mixed indeed and this portrays that well. |
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The Sea Calls Us Home (G)
by Laiquendi.
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Thu Jun 23, 2005 5:17 pm
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| Excellent. I love your poetry. I agree with RobinKa and Sam--the Elves leaving ME always touches me...it makes me sad. |
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The Last Thing He Said (G)
by NeumeIndil.
Chapters [4]
Reviews [ 15] Warnings [Possible tear jerker]
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Fri Jun 17, 2005 4:39 pm
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| Oh I'm a real sucker for animal stories. I loved this. I think Boromir would inspire this kind of loyalty. Poor thing! Very sad really. |
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Grey Havens (R)
by SpaceWeavil.
Chapters [8]
Reviews [ 19] Warnings [implied sexual content]
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Fri Jun 17, 2005 8:30 am
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The only thing I don't like about this chapter is that it is the last. I enjoyed seeing a peek of Elros in it. And I like the way you ended it--it explains why neither Cirdan or Gil-galad apparently had wives in Middle Earth. And of course it makes the fact that Gil-galad will not sail to Aman all the more sad. Also, it is very realistic. No 'oh well, let's all be happy buddies and put this behind us.' I couldn't see such a thing happening with First Age elves, so I liked this ending.
I really enjoyed seeing a story featuring these two characters. Great job, Space! |
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A Mother's Woe (G)
by Saoirse.
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Wed Jun 15, 2005 3:16 am
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| Very good! I really liked this perspective. That would indeed be the best birthday present he could give on his birthday to her. Loved this one. |
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"Arwen's Gift" and "The Reaction" (G)
by Shanalir.
Chapters [2]
Reviews [ 13] Warnings [None]
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Mon Jun 13, 2005 6:46 pm
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| Hehehe! That is great. Poor Elrond and I love the description of the frog. These were great and I really liked seeing them from two different POVs. Great job. |
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My Eyes! My Eyes! (R)
by Alassante.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 25]
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Mon Jun 13, 2005 6:16 pm
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| Hehehe! Hilarious! I was having so much fun enjoying the sensual description--but I knew from the title that there had to be a punch line. That was great Al! |
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Faramir's present. (G)
by rohanion.
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Sat Jun 11, 2005 7:19 pm
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| Agreed. Very sweet. I like Faramir in a happy moment here. Nice job. |
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Inheritance (G)
by NancyBrooke.
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Sat Jun 11, 2005 7:18 pm
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| Nice look into Eowyn's thoughts. I find her really difficult to portray but you did it well. Great job. |
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Annatar's Gift (G)
by SpaceWeavil.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 12]
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Sat Jun 11, 2005 7:16 pm
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| Excellent choice of topics for the presents challenge and a great portrayal of Khamul. I need to go back and read the new chapters in Witch King after this. I just can't stand the suspense of waiting for new chaps in that story so I've been restraining myself until you have a bunch of new ones up to read at once. But this peek into the Nazguls' minds has driven me back again. Loved it. Especially the last line. |
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