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Despised and Hated (PG-13)
by setogirl421.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 10] Warnings [Hint of necromania]
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Tue Jun 15, 2004 2:13 pm
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Good, so very good! And yes, bloody scary...  |
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For Love, Duty, and Honor (PG-13)
by saborice.
Chapters [7]
Reviews [ 3] Warnings [PG--PG-13]
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Sun Jun 13, 2004 5:27 am
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I agree with Mora. Sorry...
It has potential, I think. The grammar mistakes are, unfortunetly, far too distracting. I really like how you describe everything. It´s rather beautiful and the characterization is quite good.
Have someone beta read it and I would love to read the rest!
Just a question; how can she be a maiden if Legolas is her lover?  |
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Lament for a Homeland (G)
by Cadiliniel.
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Thu Jun 10, 2004 3:02 pm
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Oh, this was lovely!
It took me completely by surprise, but what a nice surprise it was. 
It made me think about Melkor, actually.
Very nice, indeed! |
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Echo (G)
by NancyBrooke.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 14] Warnings [None]
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Thu Jun 10, 2004 2:57 pm
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So beautiful. So sad.  |
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Allemande (PG)
by NancyBrooke.
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Thu Jun 10, 2004 1:33 pm
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Brilliant! The language is absolutely wonderful. I love the way you use the contrast between darkness and light. Everything is so beautifully described, which makes me feel like I´m there, lurking in the shadows. You have a way of making it all feel 'real'.
Both Boromir and Gríma are perfect! You make me hear their voices when I read. Very true to character!
Your way of avoiding 'he said.....he said' turned out just fine, I think. I actually didn´t notice until I read it in the end, which is good, imo. If I had noticed it right away, it would´ve meant I was bothered by it.
Oh, and "his pale face lit with false brightness" is an absolutely outstanding line!
Thank you! |
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Last edited by Anna on Thu Jun 17, 2004 3:58 am |
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Memories of the Passing (PG)
by AAAClub.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 2] Warnings [none]
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Tue Jun 08, 2004 4:29 pm
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Legolas and Faramir....interesting choice, indeed.
Hmm...what can I say? Great beginning, but it all ended too soon, I think. When they started to talk it was all over! I wanted more!
It was good while it lasted , but it left Legolas and Faramir (and me!) hanging in the air without a proper ending. |
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Strange Revels (NC-17)
by SilverMoonLady.
Chapters [4]
Reviews [ 22] Warnings [sex.... and more sex...:)]
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Fri Jun 04, 2004 3:06 pm
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Oh my! This was...uuuhmm...inspiring. Yes, inspiring!
Never thought of hobbits in that fashion before. I will continue being a PEF, but maybe I can spice things up with a wee hobbit from time to time?! 
And yes, I was impressed too by Merry being able to go through with it all with a full bladder!  Anyway, very well done! |
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Captain of the Guard (G)
by Arandil.
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Sat May 29, 2004 4:15 pm
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Very good! Very good, indeed!
I especially enjoyed how you were able to merge your story with Tolkien´s. Very impressive!
Wonderful characterization. Loved the interaction between Legolas and Thranduil. Very believable and 'true', I think.
The toasts made by Legolas and Galion were highly amusing! I´ve always imagined Legolas older than how you portrayed him, though.
I enjoyed this immensely! |
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A Treat from the Kitchen (NC-17)
by Malinorne.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 15]
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Tue May 25, 2004 5:10 pm
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Oh, I do like Thranduil! It´s always nice to read about him, especially when he´s not described as a mean, arrogant and child-abusing tyrant! 
Very good, very hot! I wouldn´t mind cheering him up!
The characterization is credible and the language flows nicely.
Speaking of language; as a fellow Swede, it feels ridiculous to write this entirely in english, sooo....
Jag är väldigt imponerad av att du skriver så bra på ett annat språk än ditt modersmål. Gud, vad jag är avundsjuk!
Kram,
Anna
PS. Why does Thranduil speak Quenya and not Sindarin? It is Quenya, right? |
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Bedside Chatter (G)
by SilverMoonLady.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 11]
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Tue May 18, 2004 4:24 am
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Lovely! Thank you for giving me a bit more substance to a character I´ve never really given much attention. Eomer, too, was good.
Both of them are warriors and it comes across really well in this fic. I´m particularly glad you didn´t portray Pippin as a prankster and a foolish child.
Well done! |
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