Reviews by sindohte

What Cannot Be Undone · Tue Feb 17, 2004 7:49 pm

What a touching story of both great pain and healing. Your story brought to life the level of trauma that the twins keep locked inside of them.

Promises to Keep · Tue Feb 17, 2004 7:10 pm

Wow your story blew me away with its magnificence!!! The way you handled the point of view was simply brilliant because I had no clue until almost the very end whose eyes the story was being told from. And when I figured it out, I was floored in disbelief and awe. Surprised smiley face

Fealty · Tue Feb 17, 2004 6:56 pm

Bravo!!! I am glad to read a plausible story where Boromir survives the attack by the Uruks. As noted above by Nancy, your characterizations were right on the money. Sigh, Crying or Very sad smiley face

I only wish that there could be an alternate extended edition of the FOTR DVD where Boromir survived.

Undómiel · Tue Feb 17, 2004 6:44 pm

You managed to humanize Arwen and show her not as the beautiful Elf maiden untouched by time and love, but rather as a mortal woman - in love with her husband and her life. My only criticism is that your sentences tended to be much too long. Other than that, an excellent job.

Through A Glass Darkly · Tue Feb 17, 2004 6:32 pm

Your story has definitely intrigued me. The first three chapters provide the right mix of back story and mysterious happenings. I look forward to when you post the next chapters. Very Happy smiley face

Elf up a Tree · Tue Feb 17, 2004 3:52 pm

A very charming vignette featuring Elladan and Elrohir. You did a nice job of envisioning the characters as young boys. It seems that even as children, the twins had the propensity for getting themselves into trouble.

Wishful Thinking · Mon Feb 16, 2004 7:12 pm

Well that is an unexpected relationship between Aragorn and Jamee. Consider me intrigued and anxious to see what comes next with your story.

Of Gold and Wood · Sun Feb 15, 2004 7:25 pm

What a beautiful story that captures the tenderness between two individuals in love. Your story has definitely given me the desire to pick up the Silmarillion once again and refresh my memory. I am glad to know that you will be continuing this series. Very Happy smiley face

Life is But A Dream · Mon Feb 09, 2004 11:13 pm

What a nice lighthearted story. The lengths male Elves will go to in order to impress a female. And nothing like Elrohir and Elladan flirting in tandem. Cool smiley face

The Oath · Sun Feb 08, 2004 11:45 pm

Your story has promise. It would be nice to see you continue with the concept of the oath made between the twins and Legolas to always standing by Aragorn's side.

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