Reviews by Hanasian

Ambush in Ithilien · Sat Oct 14, 2017 6:39 pm

Nice short. Makes me curious who is narrating in 1st person.

Scenes from a life · Sat Oct 14, 2017 9:38 am

The barmaid Eadhild of Rohan starts right off being a slutty elf-cum receptacle. Getting that out of the way early on, her deeper story comes out while continuing to be a slut. Reasonably well written. I didn't recall getting much of a description of Eadhild other than the clothing she wore early on. I may have missed it. Thanks for sharing!

Daughter of Kings · Sat Oct 14, 2017 8:57 am

This was a reasonably good read but for the heavy use of the terms 'male Ranger' and 'female Ranger' in the first couple chapters. It would have read better had you given Aralan's name right off, as her name would not have led the reader to know who she was. It would have made the beginning smoother in my opinion. By the 4th chapter it made for better reading as it got away from the generics. Thanks for sharing this 14 years ago. Yes, I'm late to the party.

Never · Fri Oct 13, 2017 8:22 pm

This is quite well done. I like the personal insights, and have to differ in saying this is "smut"> It isn't. It is more 'Erotica'. Thanks for sharing! (I know I'm 11 years late)

Memoirs of a Princess · Fri Oct 13, 2017 7:51 pm

Lady Demiya, I know I'm six years late, but I have to say this is a well-written masterpiece!

I have dot read the whole story, but read the first chapter, a few random ones in the middle, and the end. I will surely return to read every one, but thought I'd say how much I've enjoyed it so far. The 1st person narration by Finduilas really adds a depth to the story. And I like how you portray Denethor as sort of an @ss, but a noble @ss, much like Tolkien presented him to us. Thanks for sharing this story with us, and I have put it on my 'Recommended Reading' list!

Fear · Sun Oct 01, 2017 4:29 am

"In this game of ring-around-the-rosy "

For some reason that line does not fit, in the verse or in the poem.

Distant Maiden · Sun Oct 01, 2017 4:25 am

A nice read even if it was a bit wordy. We get that Faramir was moving about the room, and descriptions o it are good up to a point. Would like to have read more of what he was thinking, and I agree with another reviewer that an'Eowyn's Perspective' is needed. Being this is 13 years old at the time of my review, I think I may try and write one. Smile smiley face

Inspired · Sun Sep 17, 2017 2:40 am

Wow.... beautifully written! I agree with Cuthalion in that this isn't 'smut' as many said in their reviews, but 'erotica'.

I could see a really interesting sequel to this.

In the Midst of Adversity · Sun Sep 17, 2017 12:32 am

This was an awesome read! The articulate writing and fleshing out the characters was quite good. I rated it at 4 but I will say that I rate Chapter 30 as a 5. The depth of the whole scene of Eowyn and Faramir in the House of Healing fit into canon and really filled in the gaps nicely. Thanks for sharing!

(Yes I know I'm 15 years late in reading this. I hope life has been good for this fine writer over the years)

Good Bye, My Love · Sat Sep 16, 2017 10:25 pm

This was a beautiful short and sweet writing of what had to be a very painful day.
Thanks for sharing this!

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