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Eternal (NC-17)
by trekqueen.

Chapters [59]
Reviews [55]
Thu Jun 30, 2005 10:20 am

Oh, no! What has happened to Idril and Elrilya?

I was so happy at the beginning of the chapter; Elrilya and Glorfindel seemed so comfortable in their routine, and so at ease with one another. Then when they left, I felt sorry for Glorfindel. Poor dear. To be left alone with those kinds of responsibilities...so sad. Sad smiley face

Then, to top the chapter off, something happened to Idril and Elrilya! By the end of the chapter, I was in complete shock at the turn of events. I loved it! Very Happy smiley face

Keep up the outstanding work! I loved this chapter, and I’m anxiously looking forward to reading the next.

Michelle...
 
 
"Mysterious Fate" (NC-17)
by Cormak.

Chapters [37]
Reviews [98]
Warnings [minor language, battle scenes, sex between adults]
Thu Jun 30, 2005 9:42 am

Wonderful chapter, Cormak! Smile smiley face

The tension in this chapter literally had me on the edge of my seat! I loved it! Knowing that Kaitlyn's decision could send a warrior into battle either broken-hearted, or full of hope, had me very anxious to find out what her decision would be.

I loved the intimacy of their conversation, too. You convey the emotions of your characters superbly. Great job!

Now, if only I knew who was watching them in the shadows?! I'll definitely be awaiting your next update to find out. Smile smiley face Yes, I know that an update won't come for sometime, but that's okay...I'll be here when it arrives. Very Happy smiley face

Michelle...
 
 
By the Sea (R)
by Fyalee.

Chapters [22]
Reviews [144]
Warnings [Adult themes, angst]
Fri Jun 24, 2005 12:39 pm

Poor Lothiriel! Poor Eomer! Poor Elfhelm!

What a complicated set of characters! I love it! Lothiriel's depression, and subsequent neglect of her husband is heartbreaking. I'm glad that she now realizes that she must share her burden with her husband, even though he may not understand what has happened.

I feel so sorry for Elfhelm. His true love is so close to him, yet so far away...poor fellow. I hope he finds someone that can return his feelings, one day.

Wondeful update! I can't wait to read more.

Michelle...
 
 
Crossroads of Time (PG-13)
by ellie.

Chapters [24]
Reviews [76]
Warnings [violence; suggestive situations]
Fri Jun 24, 2005 12:29 pm

Hi Ellie! Very Happy smiley face

I loved this chapter. It really shows the strength of the relationship between Glorfindel and Ariella. How many guys...uhhh, elves...do you know that would be *THAT* understanding? I don't know any. LOL!!! But obviously, the love between these two is strong enough to endure.

I got teary when Ariella was thinking of how she had to train her children so that they may survive the future war. The thought of that is a mother's worst nightmare. How Ariella holds all that she knows to herself, is beyond me.

The part when Idril was contemplating her future with Tuor was great. Ariella's teasing was hilarious.

Lovely chapter, Ellie! Very romantic and heartwarming Smile smiley face Keep up the great work!

Michelle...
 
 
Eternal (NC-17)
by trekqueen.

Chapters [59]
Reviews [55]
Fri Jun 24, 2005 12:14 pm

Wooo Hoooo! I log on and find TWO new chapters of this wonderful story! Yay!

When Turgon left, I felt kind of sorry for Glorfindel. What did Turgon leave to find, I wonder? Is it the nature of the Elves to constantly seek the unknown? *shrugs* It's great to ponder the possible reasons for his leaving.

I say that I felt sorry for Glorfindel because he always seemed, to me, like an Elf that would not want to be tied down by heavy responsiblities. No, I'm not saying that he is irresponsible. I'm just saying that he seems to like adventure, and by taking over Turgon's duties, he would have to settle down for a while in one place.

I really like that Elrilya has taken the initiative to make him more comfortable with his new duties. I love their relationship. They always take care of each other. Oh, and I loved the fight scene, too. I'm glad that she did finally get her training.

Great chapters! Keep up the good work, and update soon. Smile smiley face

Michelle...
 
 
By the Sea (R)
by Fyalee.

Chapters [22]
Reviews [144]
Warnings [Adult themes, angst]
Mon Jun 13, 2005 1:55 pm

With all of these, "evil cliffhangers," that you've been leaving us with, I *KNOW* that you have that "evil jig" down by now. Laughing smiley face

Whoa! I was *NOT* expecting for *THAT* to happen. I also thought that Eomer would recover in time for the birth. But it was not to be, and Lothiriel will have to go through this on her own... for the time being. So sad. Crying or Very sad smiley face

This story is addictive, and I can honestly say that I am hooked. Very Happy smiley face I am always eager for the next update, but at the same time dreading it because it's one chapter closer to the end of the story. Confused smiley face

Anyhooo...great job! I'll be anxiously awaiting your next update. Smile smiley face

Michelle...
 
 
Elanor's Revenge (R)
by Julie.

Chapters [37]
Reviews [216]
Sat Jun 11, 2005 2:25 pm

Bravo! This was, yet another, excellent chapter, ladies. Smile smiley face

I jumped for joy for Rumil and Nerwen, and then turned around and felt like strangling Lurien. Hopefully, Doria or Tarwe will be able to get through to him...although that doesn't seem very likely. But you never know, right?

Elanor's dedication and love for Haldir continues to enchant, and inspire me. We all knew that she was very a very loyal being, but she really has stepped-up to the plate and asserted herself as Haldir's caretaker. I love it!

You ladies are amazing! Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful work...

Michelle...
 
 
An Eventful Evening (R)
by MaryA.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [4]
Warnings [het/con sex, graphic language, mild BDSM and kink]
Sat Jun 11, 2005 2:05 pm

That was wonderful! And a great surprise at the end, too! Very nice...

Michelle...
 
 
By the Sea (R)
by Fyalee.

Chapters [22]
Reviews [144]
Warnings [Adult themes, angst]
Sat Jun 11, 2005 1:27 pm

Oh, I really REALLY like this story. What a unique telling of the Eomer/Lothiriel romance! I love it. And your twist...well, I guess I should say, your latest twist Very Happy smiley face , was fantastic. I would have never guessed that you would do that to poor, poor Eomer. And poor Lothiriel! Geez...that poor girl.

Wonderful story...I can't wait to read more. Smile smiley face

Michelle...
 
 
Eternal (NC-17)
by trekqueen.

Chapters [59]
Reviews [55]
Sat Jun 11, 2005 1:18 pm

Wow! Now that's what I call a fast update! Very Happy smiley face

Another fantastic chapter! Now that Glorfindel, Idril, and Elrilya are finally home, it will be interesting to see how they interact with one another. Glorfindel seems to be taking his new, prestigious role in stride, so I guess that's a good sign.

I'll admit that I haven't read all of the Silmarillion, yet. It's really nice to read a great story about the earlier struggles and lives of the elves. Smile smiley face

Wondeful job! Now, I know that you've just updated TWICE in one day...I think Very Happy smiley face ...but yes, I'm going to be greedy and ask for you to update soon...again Very Happy smiley face

Hey, you can't blame a gal for trying! Very Happy smiley face

Michelle...