Reviews by Rous

The Letter · Sun Nov 27, 2005 6:07 am

Thank you for the nice reviews. Poor Elrond. I would have hated to really write that letter. But, I may yet. LOL I appreciate the reading and commenting.

The Letter · Sat Nov 26, 2005 8:12 pm

It is Elrond. Not that it is any secret. And, I put it in Sil because that would be the right time, and there was no better choice. We really need another category. I am glad you liked it. I may expand it. I am thinking seriously about that.

The Letter · Sat Nov 26, 2005 1:23 pm

shadowslayer said
> First with The Rape of Arda now this i think you should lighten up on the morbid

Ah, but then who would do it? If you want light, check out some of my other stuff. It far outweighs the morbid.
Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.

The End of All Things · Sat Nov 26, 2005 8:20 am

Hmm, not much I can add that the others have not already covered. Very well done! The language, the imagery, everything was perfect. The only thing I would have added was that Aragorn showed up because of the fall of Minas Tirith. That is implied, I believe, but it would have explained their presence. And, I believe that with the fall of Gondor, any surviving armies would have flocked to the next line of defense, of which Rohan would be a very likely choice.

Thank you for sharing.

Hay and Clover · Thu Nov 24, 2005 10:25 pm

Wow! While I am not much into hobbit stories, this was delightful. And, it was so well done, I would hardly consider it smut. A very beautiful peek into a past that the true author left for us to embellish.
Thank you for sharing.

Daughter Of Hope · Tue Nov 22, 2005 1:44 pm

First off, I will admit to only reading the first chapter of this. I will bookmark it and I even downloaded it so I could read it later. I find the premise very intriguing. You have a lot of detail and it grips the reader. However, you also have a lot of errors. It appears that English may not be your first language. If that is so, either spell check or a beta would be able to clear a lot of the grammatical errors.
I look forward to finishing this.
Thank you for sharing.

Unscarred · Mon Nov 21, 2005 9:12 pm

Very nice. I was at a loss as to who this was, as I apparently came in through the challenge page. Still, it is poignant and sums up what should be the sentiments of any forced to take the life of another.

Seems that interest is flagging for the drabble challenge. I still look forward to it every week. I hope it continues.

Thank you for sharing.

The Light I Hate; The Darkness I Love · Tue Nov 08, 2005 11:10 am

Very nice imagery. Thank you for sharing.

Shattered (Drabble) · Sun Nov 06, 2005 7:55 am

Okay, you got me ghetto. I did not mean to do that. This is cut down from a much longer passage in the story. I have found that is much harder than just writing the durned thing to begin with. I found another doubled word and fixed that also. I hope this is a bit better. Thank you.

Shattered (Drabble) · Thu Nov 03, 2005 3:26 pm

Well, okay, but it is Ela and Haldir. Same premise. I can see where it would be confusing, without the surrounding story. I am glad you liked it.

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