Reviews by Rous

Butterfly-Cocoon · Tue Mar 22, 2005 7:39 pm

Thank you, everyone that I did not thank with a PM. And Ranger, Part ll is already started. I have about three chapters. Just waiting for a beta to jump out and bite me. Seriously, it is going well. As to her meeting Estel, maybe when he is a child, but not until years later for sure, in Lórien. Maybe not until the Fellowship shows up. I actually have Part three of the original and will intertwine the two together. It is long after 'you know what' happens. That is all I will say. I am glad you are enjoying it. I love writing it.

Safe In Ada's Arms · Sat Mar 19, 2005 7:20 am

So, Celeborn is emotionless and Galadriel is cold and frigid? This is a nice departure from how they are usually portrayed. Thank you for sharing.

Singer by the shore · Sat Mar 05, 2005 11:39 am

I found this very well written and enjoyable. Thank you for sharing.

Through the Mist · Fri Mar 04, 2005 7:33 am

It is a nice idea, but it does need work. The "mere" comment; "Haunting and tempting, there was no exempting", what are you trying to say here? "The Elven ship, floated through the mist" broke your rhyming scheme. You could tighten up your rhythm and flow; it seems too uneven. This has great potential, but does need work. I would like to see it again.
Thank you for sharing.

The Calling · Thu Mar 03, 2005 10:35 pm

This just evokes the scene in the Dead Marshes. Very haunting. But, I have to agree with NB. Sounds more to me like an orc trying to lure one last victim. Very good. Thank you for sharing.

Fell Beast · Wed Mar 02, 2005 12:27 pm

To quote all the ff.net readers: Awwwwww, that was cute. *off to wash hands and mouth with soap* This was too funny. And yet, not silly. You could start a whole new fandom. Humourous Nazguls. The sites would be rife with them. I think this is something you should look into. And by the way, another story would help grease the pathway. Well, it is a thought.

Butterfly-Cocoon · Thu Feb 24, 2005 7:39 pm

ArtanisOrangeBlossom said
> i think i had the same ephiphany that Meliel had LOL keep it up *winks*
>
> ~Christina

It can hardly be a secret anymore. But, there are still a few surprises in store, yet. Thank you all for the interest. After the last four months, I need it. Life sucks you dry, then turns around and dumps you in a huge vat of renewal. That is as poetic as I am prepared to wax at this point. I hope to update as soon as the chapters I have finished are done with the beta. I think she is on vacation. Surely she does not have as much moola as my two muses managed to hijack from my stash. I think they went down to check out the status of the Resort State of Mexico. Still too many natives, including the son-in-law. My daughter is beginning to feel that green is a colour that she is never going to see on him. Ah, well, there is always the river.

Eltinuviel · Mon Feb 07, 2005 11:20 pm

Interesting. I would like to hear how it ended. PM or e-mail me, if you ever drop in to lurk.

Echo · Wed Jan 19, 2005 7:05 am

How sad, and yet beautiful. A touching rememberance of the gift of a life. Thank you for sharing.

Breathe · Wed Dec 29, 2004 12:44 am

Extremely touching. I loved the glimpse into the childhood of the brothers. And the parallel with the second story, very well done. The third just wrapped up the ends and closed the circle. Thank you so much. Drunk smiley face

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