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My Son (PG)
by EveningNightshade.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [None]
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Fri May 07, 2004 5:38 am
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| Nicely done. I am sorry I cannot think of anything original, I agree with the others. I, too, would like to see a follow-up. Maybe years later. When in between battles. Or after his father has been unreasonable to him. Or even on the eve of his wedding. Or maybe a collection of all these memories. Hmmm, now I want to go write a story. LOL |
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The Phoenix's Griffin (NC-17)
by Havetoist.
Chapters [23]
Reviews [ 21] Warnings [Sex, war violence, language]
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Thu May 06, 2004 6:37 am
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| Got to chapter 13. I must say, I am not disappointed. Thanks. |
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Tides (PG)
by AngelQueen.
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Mon May 03, 2004 12:04 pm
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Although most definately not canon, I loved it. Your summary caught my attention, because it confused me. So I decided to read the story. Glad I did! Well written. I wish you could have drawn it out longer. Not a critisism, just a desire to read more. I shall await more. Try it again. LOL
Rous |
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Captured Heart (R)
by Maeluiril.
Chapters [39]
Reviews [ 64] Warnings [mentions of child abuse]
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Mon May 03, 2004 11:39 am
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Just finished your last posted chapter. Nice place to pause, but do not do it too long. My derriere (??) gets sore waiting here for updates. Keep 'em comin', baby!!!! LOL
PS Where else did you post this? I know I read it somewhere before here. Maybe at
Elf Lore??? I remember a similar story there. Anyways, keep it up. And thanks. |
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Dance (G)
by LuthienTinuviel.
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Sun May 02, 2004 1:01 pm
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"The next step is giving it a clear emotion (you blended grief and joy, which confused me a bit) or adding a bit of a story, if you like."
I had no problem with the joy/grief line. The dance goes on no matter your emotional state. And as far as puntuation, I only use it if someone cannot see my point. Then I will try to make it clearer. But for the most part, I read poetry to see what I get out of it first and foremost. Then I look to see what the author meant.
Good job! |
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Living Stone (G)
by Tinni.
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Sun May 02, 2004 7:11 am
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Very nice. Good imagery. Could you do it again?
Rous
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The Best Gift of All (G)
by Isabeau.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 3] Warnings [Holiday Fluff]
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Sat May 01, 2004 2:23 pm
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Loved it. And how do we know "business trip" was not handed down from ME????
Anyway, it was a nice 'just relax and read without trying to tie things together' story.
Got fluff??
Rous |
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The Phoenix's Griffin (NC-17)
by Havetoist.
Chapters [23]
Reviews [ 21] Warnings [Sex, war violence, language]
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Tue Apr 27, 2004 10:57 pm
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Read through chapter twelve. Thank you. Much better. Hope I have time soon to read the rest. New chapters make up for seven. *grins sheepishly* Sorry about the critisism. I hate chapter stories to begin with. I just get warmed up and have to change pages. Short chapters are a nightmare. You know, dial-up access and overusage of the internet. 
I hope you will bear with my griping. I like the story alot. |
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The Phoenix's Griffin (NC-17)
by Havetoist.
Chapters [23]
Reviews [ 21] Warnings [Sex, war violence, language]
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Fri Apr 23, 2004 8:07 pm
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| Okay, chapter seven does not count. It was too short. Now you owe us another chapter. Well, do not just stand there!!! |
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The Phoenix's Griffin (NC-17)
by Havetoist.
Chapters [23]
Reviews [ 21] Warnings [Sex, war violence, language]
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Thu Apr 22, 2004 6:58 pm
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Well, that is better. However, it is too slow. Perhaps I should wait until you are finished and read the whole thing at once. 
Do you have more stories posted elsewhere? |
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