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Journey (G)
by SamwiseTheStrong.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 3] Warnings [none]
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Fri Nov 03, 2006 6:34 am
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| This does seem to need something. Dropping articles makes the thoughts incomplete, and awkward to read. The sentiments are quite nice; it is the delivery. |
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Courting (PG-13)
by Vulgarweed.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [Murder, bloodplay. The usual.]
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Thu Oct 19, 2006 6:05 am
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| Hmmm...yuck! This is the scariest thing I have read lately. This could be more twisted than some of my stuff. Is that good or bad? Great reading. Thank you for sharing. |
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Being and Nothingness (PG-13)
by Vulgarweed.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 8] Warnings [No happy ending, character death]
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Thu Oct 19, 2006 6:01 am
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| Caught this on the featured story. Still unbelievable. Thank you for sharing. |
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"Alive" and "Broken" (NC-17)
by Thuriniel.
Chapters [2]
Reviews [ 13] Warnings [explicit sex; strong language]
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Tue Oct 17, 2006 6:13 am
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Glad to see this featured. (Still do not like that word!)
Thank you for sharing. |
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Only Hope (G)
by Vilwarin.
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Mon Oct 09, 2006 5:33 am
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This is a nice drabble. However, there are some spelling and grammar errors.
"...imune against the cold..." should read "...immune to the cold..."
"...they would die here in the middle..." should be "...they would die here, in the middle..."
Typo: "Horses dead and eaten, thy..." you missed the 'e' in they.
And, I think "In the north, in Forodwaith..." would read better as "To the north...".
And, I am not sure about the grammar rules on this, but the line:
"Yes, there they would go and seek help." seems awkward. Perhaps "Yes, they would go there to seek help." would work better.
Overall, this is a very angsty piece. It does draw out the hardships of winter campaigning. You have done well in that regard.
Thank you for sharing. |
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"Uh-Oh" (G)
by Shanalir.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 10] Warnings [None]
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Tue Sep 26, 2006 6:01 am
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| Caught this on the featured story. It is still a nice crossover. Very apt and in character. Again, thank you for sharing. |
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Jealousy (PG-13)
by Frigg.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 3] Warnings [None]
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Sat Sep 23, 2006 10:31 am
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While not a fan of Rohirrim stories, this was excellent. Other than awkward wording in a few places, this was truly defining. You captured the moods of a woman perfectly.
Thank you for sharing. And contgratulations on featured story. |
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Left Behind (G)
by Edlyn.
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Thu Sep 21, 2006 6:37 am
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I must confess to some confusion on this one. I was under the impression that it was Faramir speaking. After reading the comments before, I went and checked the summary (I had accessed it through the featured story). I admit that it makes sense, however it still works as Faramir.
Either way, a good tale and filler.
Thank you for sharing. |
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Healing in Valinor (G)
by inglor.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 13]
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Wed Sep 13, 2006 6:14 am
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| Well, this was featured, so I read it again. I fail to find something to add. This was well thought out and executed with finesse. And, I still dislike PJ's portrayal of Galadriel and Celeborn as overly stiff and formal. I like my interpretation much better. And you have only validated my perceptions. |
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Here's to a Whole New Yule (G)
by NancyBrooke.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 14] Warnings [general foolishness]
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Tue Sep 12, 2006 1:30 pm
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Eh, hmm. Just wanted to point out these were featured. I had forgotten how funny they were. And, I think new ones are needed. You have three months to come up with some.  |
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