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The Journey Home (R)
by Ilmatar.

Chapters [18]
Reviews [16]
Warnings [Legomance]
Mon Apr 18, 2005 12:54 am

Gorgeous chapter! The development of Elaviel's character is very well done. I love her! She's so cool! And I like how you are gradually introducing the sexual tension instead of leaping right into it and having them more aquainted with each other first so they're like becoming best friends! Yay! The wolf scene had me on the edge of my seat!!! Woohoo!


Very Happy smiley face
 
 
The Journey Home (R)
by Ilmatar.

Chapters [18]
Reviews [16]
Warnings [Legomance]
Sun Dec 05, 2004 8:44 pm

Another well written chapter! I JUST CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT!!!! So exciting!

Ciao!
 
 
The Journey Home (R)
by Ilmatar.

Chapters [18]
Reviews [16]
Warnings [Legomance]
Thu Oct 28, 2004 1:06 pm

Another great chapter! I can't wait for the next!!!

Ciao!
 
 
And the Sky Full of Stars (PG)
by JMac.

Chapters [21]
Reviews [9]
Tue Sep 07, 2004 2:32 pm

Absolutely gorgeous!!!!!!!! I actually got upset and had an expression of horror on my face when Elesia fell in the water, I was like, no! no! no! It can't end this way!!! Thankfully it didn't! So sweet!!!!

Ciao!
 
 
A Modest Suggestion (PG-13)
by Haleth.

Chapters [4]
Reviews [21]
Sun Sep 05, 2004 1:22 am

THIS IS HYSTERICAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That thing with Erestor at the end! Too funny!!!! Very Happy smiley face

Ciao!
 
 
Pitfalls of the Palantir (PG-13)
by Haleth.

Chapters [46]
Reviews [91]
Warnings [Extreme length.]
Fri Sep 03, 2004 12:48 am

T'Ang?! Ha! Ha! That's so clever of you! Hee, hee! "T'Ang: it's a kick in a flask!" Very Happy smiley face Smile smiley face

Ciao!
 
 
Pitfalls of the Palantir (PG-13)
by Haleth.

Chapters [46]
Reviews [91]
Warnings [Extreme length.]
Thu Sep 02, 2004 6:10 pm

What? That's it? WHY??? Come on! Please! There's such tension between Inglor and Haleth, well maybe more on Haleth's side, perhaps, but It's obvious that Inglor has a strong affection for her as well! But, then I may be mistaking your writing of his affection as something romantic when maybe you intended his feelings for her to be that of a sort of mentor or something, that he perhaps saw her as a child, him being so old and her being preety much a child compared to his immortal years. But, if it was romantic interest on his part please don't stop there! I beg of you! I think it would add so much more to Inglor's already delightful character and add further depth.

Ciao!
 
 
The Journey Home (R)
by Ilmatar.

Chapters [18]
Reviews [16]
Warnings [Legomance]
Thu Sep 02, 2004 1:13 pm

Wow . . . that first paragraph was sheer poetry! This is an awesome story so far! And really exciting, I was on the edge of my seat through the entire chapter! I can't wait for the next one!!! Surprised smiley face
 
 
The Princess and the King (PG-13)
by JMac.

Chapters [10]
Reviews [15]
Sun Aug 01, 2004 11:00 pm

That was really good! So sweet!!!
 
 
Enigmas-The Life and Love of Frodo and Linwe (PG-13)
by MysteriousWays.

Chapters [43]
Reviews [5]
Sat Jul 31, 2004 12:20 pm

That last part was SO sweet!! Very Happy smiley face