Reviews by Duchess

The Journey · Wed Jul 07, 2004 7:47 am

I'm glad the poor thing finally left that room to go somewhere else, did she like the painting? We didn't get to see her really react to it.

I look forward to seeing if Estel can draw her out of her shell more. Children are good at that sort of thing, without even trying really. Smile smiley face

Haldir is a sneaky pete, isn't he? Cute that he finally got back at them. 8g*

I'm beginning to wonder if Legolas has fallen into a hole, the way you've ignored his character for the last while. No one seems to care about him anymore. Sad smiley face

New Beginnings · Mon Jul 05, 2004 2:00 am

I'm curious about the contradiction you have going on. Did you not intend to continue with the idea that the girls knew about LotR and it's characters? Because now you have them, or Cecilia at least, acting like she knows nothing about it. *puzzled*

In any case, if I ignore that completely this is an enjoyable little tale and I look forward to seeing more updates. Smile smiley face

All for the Ones I Love · Sat Jul 03, 2004 5:49 am

Honey, school should always, ALWAYS come first, so don't make excuses about that. {{{hugs}}}

I enjoyed this part, though you really should have let Arwen hear and be amused by Legolas' helping Aragorn and Legolas should have heard Arwen's reply. Perhaps you could show that later, but you don't have to. *g* This was adorably cute, all the same.

Um, how did the messenger know about Estel and Arwen? Was more time supposed to have passed at that point? That wasn't clear.

As I said, I liked this part a lot and look forward to more, as long as it doesn't interfere with your school work. Okay? *vbg* Take care,

April

Cats and Elves · Wed Jun 30, 2004 9:14 am

Um, WHY did they leave those children alone like that? how very stupid of them. Grrrr And um, I hate to say it, but the way you wrote this, it's very unclear who is related to whom among the werecats here.

Rish and Elladan need to grow up. Why don't the others stop this? One of them could get hurt. *worried*

As usual, your author's notes at the end are quite funny. *giggling*

All for the Ones I Love · Wed Jun 30, 2004 5:18 am

LOL This is cute! You had the twins pull a Cerano (sp?) number and now Aragorn wants Legolas to help him do the same thing! LOL Only problem is, being an Elf, Arwen will hear Legolas tell him what to say. They'd better come up with another plan, one where he memorizes certain phrases to say to certain things she might say to him. *vbg*

I liked this chapter, thought your dialogue was fine, but it was a tad confusing with the flashbacks plural. I was able to get the gist of what you're trying to convey, I think. Smile smiley face

Through A Glass Darkly · Tue Jun 29, 2004 2:23 pm

Creepy sinister person in the background, who/what is it? I adore the use of a Fairy Ring and wonder why "Master" won't like the fact they used it. This story is very interesting so far and I'd love to see more.

I am sooo glad you're taking time to build up the story like you are, so many fics just jump right in, mine included. *makes a face* So take as much time as you need to set the tale on the right track, okay? I'm enjoying it. Smile smiley face

Oh and hey, not just in Peculiar would a woman follow a stranger like that. If I had just faced that mutant squirrel from Hell, I'd follow the guy with the weapons to deal with any more of them too. Handsome or not! *vbg*

Cats and Elves · Tue Jun 29, 2004 11:06 am

*cracking up over your little note at the end*

Oh boy, what a way to let people know you're a Werecat! LOL Poor little munchkin. Stupid hawk! Was that her brother that overheard the conversation? Ii'm hoping he heard the part where they said they were gonna take care of her, not throw her out!

More please!? *vbg*

The Journey · Tue Jun 29, 2004 9:33 am

Yaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyy she remembered her name. That's a good sign, but I wish she'd get a chance to meet Legolas while she's there too and NOT freak out about it if she does. *sigh*

That last bit with Estel was darling and you can't put too much of Daddy Elrond in there for me. *vbg* Nice work! More please, soon as you're able. Smile smiley face

New Beginnings · Tue Jun 29, 2004 9:23 am

An interesting story. I look forward to seeing what you do with it because I ADORE those three brothers, especially Haldir. *vbg*

I wonder what the explanation of Cecilia being an Elf will be? *curious*

All for the Ones I Love · Tue Jun 29, 2004 5:15 am

Very angsty and sad. I feel sorry for the twins not taking back their harsh words before now. Elves sometimes forget that man, even a Dunadan like Aragorn, see the passage of time far differently than they and what seems like no time to an Elf is a century to a human. *sigh* (Incidentally, a feral plot bunny attacked me with a story idea that last week utilizes just that premise and now I'm working on yet ANOTHER story, which won't get posted till it's done, like the rest of them. lol)

WEll I'm looking forward to the next chapter and hope you can get it out soon. I am really hoping for a miracle here, because if there isn't one, the future of Middle Earth is looking mightly bleak! Sad smiley face

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