Reviews by Duchess

Cats and Elves · Fri Jun 25, 2004 8:46 am

Okay, so she meant to show herself to him then, huh? All right. He's going to need to take her straight to his father, but I hope she waits outside the door in cat form while he gets dressed. LOL When does the embarrassment really hit him and has Elrohir changed in front of her too? *giggling at the thought*

Looking forward to more. Smile smiley face

All for the Ones I Love · Thu Jun 24, 2004 12:31 am

I think that was better, yes. *g* Good job!

I liked this little flashback, nice family stuff with the gaiety and the motherly worry and then Elrond's mock stern father figure lecture. Very nice. More soon? *hopeful look*

Captured Heart · Wed Jun 23, 2004 10:33 pm

Oh my, what a way for Haldir to find out his daughter is engaged. LOL Really cute that Megilindir had to eat Rumil's cooking and that Zinnia managed to trick Celeborn into hosting the ceremony. *giggle* I LOVED this! Wonderful! Please don't wait so long to post more? *vbg*

Cats and Elves · Tue Jun 22, 2004 9:06 am

Okay, CREEPY dream! Elladan needed the kitty to sleep with him, didn't he? I'm assuming that was a very vivid dream because you can NOT kill everybody off like that. *shaking my head* Nope, uh uh, nosiree Bob, no can do. *adamant headshake* Did the Were people send him that dream? I wanna know! Smile smiley face

I agree with your clone, that was an especially evil cliffie stop considering you won't be updating for a while. Please come back before we get too far into withdrawal, okay? *vbg*

All for the Ones I Love · Fri Jun 18, 2004 8:16 am

Sweetie, you said you hadn't gotten any reviews for this and now I see why. You make notes at the top and bottom of the last two parts saying you're getting reviews. Maybe you are in another forum, but saying so in THIS one is one reason why you're not here. People read that and think, "Oh, since I don't really have time anyway, I won't leave a review since she's already getting some." Or something similar. So I'm suggesting you edit out that commentary when you post the fic here, okay?

Honestly it irks me no end when peopel read but don't leave feedback. That's rude in my opinion, but lots do just that and there's nothing we can do to break them of the habit. If they wrote stories they'd know how it felt to be ignored. Not nice!

Well, on with my impression of the story. Yes, definitely lots of angst in this AU fic of yours and you're doing it well, as far as I can see. Good job! Legolas being so frank isn't going to make anyone happy with him shortly. I hope he can soften his recriminations a tad so that he doesn't alienate the twins, who seem to be good friends of his too. They all need to comfort one another when Aragorn dies. It looks like you're letting him die here anyway. *sniffle* Too sad! Please write more? *vbg*

Advice offered: Get a beta to help you proofread these fics. They're too good to be riddled with misspellings and wrong words used, even if it IS still easy to tell what you meant. Smile smiley face

Cats and Elves · Fri Jun 18, 2004 5:18 am

Predictions? I didn't make any, just asked questions and made a statement is all. *g*

So, what will Elrond find out about the kitty? Will he realize what she is and confront her, but maybe keep her secret from everyone else for her own protection? Will he be fooled into thinking she's a regular cat if she's on her guard more? You did say she's very young, and youngsters make mistakes, so I'm thinking she might make one or two (more than she already has) and give herself away completely. (THAT was a prediction. LOL)

May I offer a little bit of advice? You really need a beta to catch mispellings and wrong words in places where you most likely make a change and then didn't delete everything that was no longer necessary. (I do that ALL the time, much to my annoyance.) If you go to the message boards and ask for one, I'm sure someone will volunteer. Smile smiley face

And once again your little bit at the end was cute and funny. Will we get to "see" the reactions of the clones when they find out they're to be "stored" away in the cellar while you're busy? *giggle* Better make sure you trick them into going down there or you'll have a mutiny on your hands. LOL

As for reading your other story, I'll see what I can do later, (ought to be going out the door this very second to get to work) but I can't promise anythng and today will be extremely busy. Okay? *g*

Halls of Mandos · Thu Jun 17, 2004 5:38 pm

I liked it, but it was too brief. *g* Granted the material called for brevity, but I'm a sucker for Haldir fics and always greedily want more. LOL

I've seen vignettes deal with what was going through Haldir's mind as he died, but not quite like this. *nodding* You did a pretty good job, I'd say. Smile smiley face

You might want to change "except" to accept there near the end too. I've gone over my stuff ten times before posting, yet I still miss a simple error like that every time. Gotta love a beta, they usually spot what we miss. Wink smiley face

The Journey · Wed Jun 16, 2004 9:25 pm

Now that vision was just cruel! You're hinting that she's gonna end up with Haldir there. *sigh* I want her to remember Legolas... Could it have been him in Lothlorien colors? *hopeful look*

Too bad the girl had a bit of a setback in the gardens, going out would be good for her. Poor thing!

More story please? This is good. *vbg*

Cats and Elves · Wed Jun 16, 2004 11:04 am

*giggle* Your little acts at the end of each chapter are very funny. *g*

I really liked this part. Now, what will Aragorn do? Will he pretend not to recognize her and talk to Elrond in private? I hope so because if he tells Van Helsing I will be sorely disappointed in him! *pout* Very cute of Elrond to be on the cat's side when it comes to getting her way. That's not a spell or anything, is it? *curious*

Cats and Elves · Tue Jun 15, 2004 8:11 pm

Sheesh, that's a lot of bunnies! Anya would flip out and whack her computer screen with whatever weapon Xander had left lying handy, wouldn't she? *snicker*

Well I think this story is cute and I am looking forward to more. Very soon, I hope. What's the "kitty's" name gonna be? Um, hope the guys don't change clothes in front of her. Imagine how embarrassed they'll be later! LOL

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