Reviews by inglor

A Modest Suggestion · Thu Aug 26, 2004 4:53 pm

Me too, it was a hoot, can't wait to read the rest again

Bitter Watches · Thu Aug 19, 2004 1:02 pm

You are very skilled. Those above have already said what I feel about this piece. I will add that I really like how you fit the puzzle pieces together, taking something that really stretches canon and fits it right in to make it plausible.

Inglor

Reflections · Fri Jul 30, 2004 4:00 pm

I have nothing better to add. I find it strange that a story with so many hits has so few reviews.
I found that while I was squicked about the incest, I couldn't stop reading.
Its not often that writers are willing to explore such darkness. Very brave

Whispers · Mon Jul 19, 2004 1:12 pm

Now that, ladies and gentlemen, is how to write Celeborn and Galadriel.

I have always pictured Celeborn this way, in fact IMHO is the only plausible way to see him. If he's the slightest bit jealous, he has gone crazy or very resentful by now. Confident, but not arrogant, supportive but not fawning, one of the few beings in ME that can stand up to her.

I also like how you have Galadriel wishing he got more of the accolades and that Celeborn isn't resentful of the absence.

Giving Nenya sentience is pure genius.

Makes you wonder about Narya and Vilya... Bunny smiley face

Galadriel's struggle with it was great, especially how she gloats and repremands it

Your representation of the mental aspect of Elven sex is how I have imagined it. The physical sex itself was great but how you used it as a device took skill.

I can't gush enough about this story. I would do a line by line praise orgy but it might spoil it for the rest.

Inglor

Gold Like Tears · Thu Jun 24, 2004 4:11 pm

What a wonderful trip through the Professor's works. All tied up in one piece of gold. Absoulutely phenominal. Your skill is humbling. Do you do this for a living? tell me where to buy it.
I see now why you are nominated in nearly every catagory in the Mithril Awards, you are that good.

Inglor

Inspired · Fri May 28, 2004 12:30 pm

Don't take this the wrong way but:
Everytime I get to thinking my writing is worth a crap, I read someting like this. I might as well line a hamster cage with mine.
I once thought to pair up Finrod and an OC in much the same way, but now I can't b/c there is no way I can pull it off with this kind of skill and beleivability. You're killing me Lady. Very Happy smiley face

Have I mentioned that I loved this. I had to write a review before I could finish it. I really can't put into words how much I admire this. Every emotion was completely crystaline. "Twining his fingers in her hair" wow, I could see the look on his face, know what he was thinking. I am in awe. if I can write like this, I can be happy.

Is this a talent or lots of practice? Please tell me lots of practice...

Inglor
*struggling with the urge to buy a shredder*

A Treat from the Kitchen · Thu May 27, 2004 8:54 am

I like this Thranduil; gentle, honorable and smart. I really like how you focus on the romance instead of the actual sex. Described just enough so the reader knows what's going on (and find arousing) but not drawing the attention away from the real issue.
I don't know if it was your intent but the end had the feeling of an Elven ritual, and I liked it. Just imagine the looks!!!

Inglor

Cold Comfort · Thu May 20, 2004 8:54 am

Well done. You portray the characters very well. I like how you described her resignation. I also liked the irony of thier views of each other. A well hung Grima, nice twist.

Inglor

Legends · Tue May 11, 2004 9:12 am

I thoroughly enjoyed this. I especially like some of your descriptions: "a silver shard in the sky", "dewy coupling", etc. ,very descriptive.
Impressive

Inglor

Don't Panic! · Fri May 07, 2004 9:20 am

Ditto, Ditto, Ditto,
I will add:
1. This story redeemes nearly all those "MarySues" that make us cringe.
2. This story should be required reading for all would be Tolkien fan fiction writers.

Thanks for keeping me up till 2 on a week night
Inglor Need Coffee smiley face

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