Reviews by Hathor

Love of the Sea · Fri Aug 01, 2003 3:33 pm

Ooooh, looking forward to the next chapter already. Poor Finduilas and poor Imrahil... there was just one small typo that I spotted: ~“I am in morning.”~ Did you mean "I am in mourning?" It's not a particulary big problem, it just jarred the sentance a little bit for me.

Anyway! Good writing, and some very powerful images. I agree with Scribe- I hope Imrahil kicks the servants asses. Twisted Evil smiley face

The Diary · Fri Aug 01, 2003 3:17 pm

I do like Hobbit fics as a rule, I just never particulary liked Frodo... but hell, now I'm converted. Wonderful job- it truly touched me. And as for the ending... wow.

The Weakness Of Men · Fri Aug 01, 2003 3:08 pm

Interesting in-depth look at the relationship between Boromir and Aragorn- you captured Aragorn's 'voice' really well. Good job!

Aglarond · Thu Jul 31, 2003 10:14 am

Wow. It's so nice to see Legolas/Gimli non0slash interaction, and this fic was beautiful. Absolutely brilliant.

The Empty Vessel · Mon Jul 28, 2003 3:04 pm

Oh, I have a new favourite chapter! I love the way you've characterised the twins "Must you? We will help you escape this wretched bore!" and Elrond. Actually, natch that, I really loved all of the characterisation in this chapter in particular. Bounce smiley face

I loved the humour in particular- "Can I ask a really silly question? Am I getting married today?"

I just wished that you'd given a Kleenex warning for the actual marriage, when Haldir gives her Duncan's rose. Bawl smiley face

You can't do that to me when I'm all hormonal anyway!

In summary- fantastic amazing chapter and I can't wait for the next one!

The Empty Vessel · Sun Jul 13, 2003 10:33 am

Just found this story, and EGADS!

Logically, I should hate it. Haldir/OFC and songfic? Yet... I'm enjoying this story far more than I should. Bronwyn is a thoroughly likable character, you've managed to keep everyone pretty in charatcer, AND there's a REASON as to why she was dumped in Moria. The humour is fantastic, the song choices are DAYUM good, and yet there's some good ole Biblical-type proclamations (go Bronwyn! Accept your destiny!) and a fair heft of angst too. I also just had to comment on how well you've written Duncan- it was very moving.

My one teeny nitpick is referring to what looks like typing errors- there's a couple of missing ounctuations dotted around. But that doesn't actually detract from the fic. It's only Grammer Nazi's like me who would pick up on it anyway.

And now I'm just waiting for the next chapter! Very Happy smiley face

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