Reviews by picara

Knives in the Dark · Wed May 11, 2005 7:08 am

I love your sense of humor, Space Weavil. That really caught me off guard. Great job. ROFL smiley face

The Light I Hate; The Darkness I Love · Mon Apr 25, 2005 9:01 am

Needless to say, I am also very interested in Eol. Nice job here. Smile smiley face

In the Shadows · Mon Apr 25, 2005 8:59 am

Ooo. You really have a sick Grima here. Yuck! Well done!

In the Absence of Life · Mon Apr 25, 2005 8:57 am

Very sad. I was always curious about Arwen's final journey. Good job.

Dead · Mon Apr 25, 2005 8:55 am

You captured Denethor's suffering very well. Good job.

I Never Hated You · Mon Apr 25, 2005 8:55 am

I like this view of poor old L. I like to think she wasn't all bitterness, so I liked this drabble. I agree this one deserves to be developed into a full story.

Shelob: More Letters from Mordor · Fri Apr 15, 2005 6:37 am

This was a funny view of good, old Shelob. Sick, really. I loved it. Good job having a little fun with the baddies. PS. Thranduil wishes to make it clear that his stronghold is not a restaurant. That part was what really killed me. Just sick!

Not Wholly Unwilling · Wed Apr 13, 2005 10:23 am

Hi mistressofbucklebury, RobinKa and NancyBrooke. Thanks for the reviews and I will send a PM to thank you too. Smile smiley face

But I wanted to respond to NancyBrooke's comment. The first phrase starts out with three verbs, the next with one and the last flows straight into the verb in an attempt to produce a sort of falling/stumbling/spiraling rhythm. I guess it didn't work for you Nancy. Sorry about that. But that was the intent. Confused smiley face

The Master of the Mouth · Wed Apr 13, 2005 6:55 am

Good job showing this twisted submission to thralldom. Great word choice. As RobinKa said, so many emotions in so few words.

E-nlend uin Estel · Tue Apr 12, 2005 11:24 am

Like the portrayal of the character's here and the dialogue. Good job.

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