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The Price of Immortality (NC-17)
by Siladan.
Chapters [16]
Reviews [ 29] Warnings [sexual situations]
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Tue Mar 08, 2005 9:26 pm
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I saw the names Legolas, and the twins...I instantly had to check this story out! I am becoming more fascinated by the twins....  |
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We Survived Because of Me! (G)
by PoweroftheBook.
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Mon Mar 07, 2005 9:09 pm
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| Ahhhh.....precious! |
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The Blood Flower (PG)
by warriorelfmaiden.
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Wed Mar 02, 2005 11:52 pm
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| I agree with ellisk. This piece could have potential, in trust that you fix it up. Right now it seems like a piece a young person who's just tried to write something for the first time, which is, not very good. Include much more background, story, details, and the like, and it will make your story much more interesting. Also, don't forget to edit and have someone else edit your story as well. Keep it up! |
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Funny...This Doesn't Look Like Vegas... (R)
by Emmess.
Chapters [18]
Reviews [ 39] Warnings [none]
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Mon Feb 28, 2005 12:07 am
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LMAO! Can't wait for the next chapter:
Haldir vs. Alice Round 2!
"Great Eru! He's killed her!" ---Classic!!
Ok, I think I'll just email my comments to you from now on, so I don't keep making new posts! |
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Last edited by thegraybluebird on Mon Feb 28, 2005 11:21 pm |
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A Tookish Prayer (NC-17)
by Eyborg.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 9] Warnings [Sex]
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Wed Feb 23, 2005 9:44 pm
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| I feel an "aww" moment coming on. A sweet little tale you've got here. I'll be watching for more. |
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Funny...This Doesn't Look Like Vegas... (R)
by Emmess.
Chapters [18]
Reviews [ 39] Warnings [none]
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Tue Feb 22, 2005 5:37 pm
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Yes, thank you for reconsidering and continuing. I look forward to reading more. 
Chappie 7---SQUEE!!
And Chappie 8!!
This should be good: Haldir vs. Alice. |
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Last edited by thegraybluebird on Sun Feb 27, 2005 2:16 am |
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Haldir's Fall (PG-13)
by BellemaineChercoeur.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 9] Warnings [Character Death: Haldir]
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Sun Feb 20, 2005 2:14 am
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| Wow, this was very well done. I'm speechless at what to say other than great job. *mutters 'Stupid PJ!'* |
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Funny...This Doesn't Look Like Vegas... (R)
by Emmess.
Chapters [18]
Reviews [ 39] Warnings [none]
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Sat Feb 19, 2005 7:30 pm
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| May I ask why you abruptly ended this story? I could have seen this story going on for many more chapters. I would have liked to see what happened in Gondor, and with the twins. It seems that the twins really cared for her. It would have been interesting to see if even a slight romance could have developed between Alice and one of the twins. Even if not that, I truly wish you would consider revising and not make Chapter 6 the conclusion. |
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The Road Home (PG-13)
by DinaLori.
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Thu Feb 17, 2005 10:34 pm
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| I swear people know what I'm thinking, because I came here to post basically what Weav just said. I think the beginning of this story was well thought out, and even with scenes from the movie intact, your originality stands out and makes these scenes seem new again. I can't wait to read more! |
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Rebirth (PG-13)
by Thuriniel.
Chapters [3]
Reviews [ 24] Warnings [Death; AU]
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Thu Feb 17, 2005 5:55 pm
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| I completely agree with everyone, and I can't wait to read more. |
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