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Revenge is a dish best served cold (PG-13)
by Lialathuveril.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [8]
Wed Apr 26, 2006 7:36 am
Funny and wonderfully disgusting. You wouldn't have by chance gotten your "delicacies" from Icelandic cooking would you? Laughing smiley face
 
 
Watching from the Walls (G)
by Lilan.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [1]
Wed Apr 26, 2006 7:34 am
It is a very good drabble, do you have plans on perhaps expanding it? It has potential to be expanded but it speaks volumes as is. Ride Imrahil ride is a powerful last line.
 
 
Fun with Farm'n (PG-13)
by Sulriel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [12]
Warnings [Orc humor]
Wed Apr 26, 2006 7:27 am
Truly imaginative! I loved the last line - disgusting yet Orcishly delightful.
 
 
The Men We Become (G)
by Halfwest.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Wed Apr 26, 2006 7:25 am
Very heartfelt story. I love the way you wrote with sounds and your use of water as a tool to tell your story.
 
 
Love conquers Everything (PG-13)
by karol89.
Chapters [10]
Reviews [3]
Wed Apr 26, 2006 7:14 am
Interesting concept - a love square instead of a triangle. However a BETA would really help the story flow easier. I don't know if it is a convention of your first language, and if so I apologize, but I can not find your spelling of Eywon anywhere. Tolkien spelled it Eowyn (of course i can't put in proper accents).

It has all the elements of a very good story, told from a very talented and imaginative writer. But if I were you I would ask for a BETA - it would only help. You can ask for one on this site in the Forum Index; there is a Topic of BETA NEEDED and you can request one there. Can't be sure you'll get one and if not perhaps you can run a computer document checker program on the next chapter.
 
 
Pyres of Illusion (PG)
by Tindomiel.
Chapters [3]
Reviews [3]
Warnings [violence, mild]
Fri Apr 07, 2006 2:22 pm
I liked this new chapter, especially the way you write and handle the Harad and other cultures as they most suredly would have been part of a new united kingdom. I'm surprised no one else has reviewed.
 
 
Battle Cries (PG)
by saborice.
Chapters [7]
Reviews [9]
Wed Apr 05, 2006 3:07 pm
Very lovely story.
 
 
Oasis (G)
by Radbooks.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Mon Apr 03, 2006 2:51 pm
The subject matter is foreign to me but the way you descriptively wrote i could see everything clearly and understand what was going on.
 
 
To Aid a Comrade (G)
by AngmarsElfhild.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [4]
Mon Apr 03, 2006 2:47 pm
Nicely written. I like the voice you gave to Merry - as one that is there facing his destiny.
 
 
Pyres of Illusion (PG)
by Tindomiel.
Chapters [3]
Reviews [3]
Warnings [violence, mild]
Mon Apr 03, 2006 2:45 pm
I absolutely love your introductory paragraphs about history turning into legend. Now i'm wondering where the next chapter will go - don't keep us waiting to long.
 
 
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