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Starlight Bathing, or The First Time... (NC-17)
by curiouswombat.
Chapters [3]
Reviews [ 9] Warnings [sexual situations]
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Wed Jan 07, 2009 9:28 am
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You may need another cold shower after chapter 3, which I will post this evening, my time.
And I'm very much looking forward to reading it, and to the subsequent cold shower  Your writing is truly awesome! |
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| Author's replied on Wed Jan 07, 2009 3:05 pm |
*Your writing is truly awesome!*
What a lovely compliment, thank you so much. Get the fan and the ice-cubes out - chapter 3 is now posted. |
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Starlight Bathing, or The First Time... (NC-17)
by curiouswombat.
Chapters [3]
Reviews [ 9] Warnings [sexual situations]
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Wed Jan 07, 2009 5:00 am
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I apologize if my review doesn't seem overly coherent, but as soon as I finished reading I was in dire need of cold shower (or at least of a bucket of icy-cold water all over my head) and I'm still rather dazed from the reading experience. I had all sorts of 'dayum, hotttttt' expressions cross my mind, but well, hardly my fault  .
This was very sensual, classy and erotic to bits (I'm inclined toward the opinion that a bathing and wet elf is better than just an elf, LOL). A romantic in me sighed happily when Rumil apologized for his behavior back in Minas Tirith. All in all, a most enjoyable read, and I'll be here to review when the third chapter is posted.
Thank you! |
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| Author's replied on Wed Jan 07, 2009 9:17 am |
Thank you - I am glad that you are enjoying it...!
There wasn't really room in the original to put these scenes in, they would have upset the pacing, although they were there, in outline, in my head. So I really enjoyed trying to make a coherent picture of this for others to share.
I am glad that you found the apology right - it just sort of wrote itself once I got to 'this is not the first time that I have taken you out of this dress'.
You may need another cold shower after chapter 3, which I will post this evening, my time. |
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Starlight Bathing, or The First Time... (NC-17)
by curiouswombat.
Chapters [3]
Reviews [ 9] Warnings [sexual situations]
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Tue Jan 06, 2009 5:29 am
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*weeeeeeeeeeeeeee*
It was me, uttering a girly squeeeeeeeeeeee when I saw another story in your "The Key" series, hehe. Of course, I read this chapter immediately, and I can say: LOVE it! I had a good laugh at the bath scene -- especially when Dawn was informed she was observed by the elves. She at least did her... let's say: cross-cultural research less openly. Gods! I would probably stare at them with my jaw dropped; she was very subtle.
It's good to see her adapt as well as could be, though I'm sure she would feel homesick from time to time. And what Legolas said: that he knew what it was like to be the only elf among the humans -- I nodded thoughtfully and said, "yeah, Dawn's still a stranger, and in some ways she'll always be."
Oh, and Rumil was hot!
Thanks a lot for posting! I'll be watching this story.
All the best,
Binka |
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| Author's replied on Tue Jan 06, 2009 4:37 pm |
| Thank you! It is lovely to know that you are enjoying this visit to the RoTK 'verse. I have just posted chapter two - where they get to actually GO Starlight Bathing... |
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Victim of the Unlight (PG)
by Alassante.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [character death]
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Sat Jan 03, 2009 2:43 pm
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What I find really horryfying, in a good sense, about this ficlet wasn't even the gory images of Finwe's death at the hands of Melkor. It was, I think, his hope that Feanor would avenge that, but Finwe had no idea what the revenge might bring -- the terrible oath, the rebellion and the kinslaying.
Perfectly done. It sent chills down my spine. |
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Pink (G)
by LadyRoisin.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 2] Warnings [none]
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Sat Jan 03, 2009 9:51 am
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Oh, joys of being a parent, LOL (I'm going to bet Aragorn must have looked pretty awesome in pink and the orcs might have run away screaming without fighting ). Kids can be so inventive, can't they? Their ideas may surprise even someone as used to being extra careful as Aragorn was.
This made me smile, and giggle too because I suddenly remembered when I was a kid, and poured a lot of water into the container with my mom's favorite shampoo -- I wanted her to have more of it without buying a new, expensive bottle, LOL.
Such a cute, adorable ficlet! Very nicely done! Thank you for sharing  |
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Leave Me Not (PG-13)
by Aearwen2.
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Sat Jan 03, 2009 7:54 am
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Great chapter! I love how you've portrayed Thranduil here -- stubborn in his effort to help Elara, and gentle at the same time. It's also good to see that she wants to recover too and she's understood that she is the most important person to help her do so.
I'm looking forward to reading more |
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Peace At Last (PG)
by LadyRoisin.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 3] Warnings [Angst;Might need tissues]
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Fri Jan 02, 2009 3:17 am
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This is such a beautiful and emotional scene! It reminds me of the FotR movie and the scene when Aragorn bade farewell to his mother. But here, many years after, he says good-bye to his daughter, and you have portrayed him, and conveyed his thoughts, very well. I can "see" him stand there and trail his fingers along the letters carved in the stone. And I love the birds -- the symbol of peace Aragorn finally found.
Very beautiful. Very well done. Thank you for sharing |
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Be My Everlovin' Baby (PG)
by Alassante.
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Sun Dec 28, 2008 9:41 am
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Hehehehe, I so didn't see this coming. Poor Twins
Very nice. Thank you a lot for sharing! |
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The Huntsman and the Lady (NC-17)
by Sulriel.
Chapters [4]
Reviews [ 10] Warnings [it's NC-17, what more warning do you need?]
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Fri Dec 26, 2008 10:53 am
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| Very nice! Hot and sexy, and it's so good to see a wilder side of Celeborn -- he must have been like this in the First Age, when the world was young. Thank you for sharing this. It was a very entertaining read! |
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| Author's replied on Fri Dec 26, 2008 5:42 pm |
| Thank you for reading Robin. I did try to step back from the LoTR-Celeborn we see in the Third Age and imagine him young when I wrote this, so I'm glad to hear that came through for you. |
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Forgiveness (PG)
by LadyBluejay.
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Mon Dec 22, 2008 3:59 pm
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| Utterly adorable! Thank you so much for sharing Merry Christmas! |
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| Author's replied on Tue Dec 23, 2008 3:37 pm |
| Glad you enjoyed.Thanks for reviewing.LBJ |
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