Reviews by RobinKa

Pride · Mon Sep 24, 2007 5:39 am

What a surprise! This is a superb continuation, Neu Very Happy smiley face

I can echo the above review, and I can also say that you've done a great job portraying Gamling in a tough moment of his life. It adds a lot to his characterization. Also, I like Morwen's reaction when she saw him, in the end of the chapter. Very well done! Eagerly waiting for the next part Very Happy smiley face

Gif he on þreat cymeð. (If He with Threat Comes.) · Mon Sep 03, 2007 2:01 am

Awwww, he indeed has now something to think about.

Beautifully done, my dear. You've brought the social and cultural differences between Gamling's and Morwen's lives (and people) very well. It was a great insight into Gamling's feelings toward Morwen and his thoughts about the future and fate of his own land.

Thanks for updating. I'm looking forward to reading more.

(((hugs)))

The Waker · Fri Jul 20, 2007 2:46 pm

Oooooh, this was brilliant, Nancy! Utterly chilling and excellently executed. I could almost hear "Jaws" music theme. Bravo!

Gif he on þreat cymeð. (If He with Threat Comes.) · Sat Jul 14, 2007 10:58 am

O! They're back! Morwen and Gamling are back, folks! Very Happy smiley face

Honestly, it's actually the second time you surprise me today, and it's such a wonderful surprise! Very Happy smiley face

This is a great start. The new characters promise fun, especially the witty Lily (lovely exchange with Walda, btw), and oh the second chapter Smile smiley face

I can't get rid of the bow metaphor, you know, since that day I read this chap for the first time. Hehe, I've got a thing for archers Wink smiley face

Excellent read my dear! Keep up the awesome work Very Happy smiley face

Maedhros Rising · Sat Jul 14, 2007 5:51 am

Oh, Isil, this was a very, very enjoyable read. Sizzling hot Very Happy smiley face

well written and very entertaining.

Thank you for sharing. Loved it Smile smiley face

The Rescue of Celebrian · Sat Jul 14, 2007 5:39 am

Hey! I'm so glad to see this story posted here! And I'm really happy that you decided to venture into the elves' realm Smile smiley face

Now, you've got such a heart-wrenching story here. I already told you that I verged on bursting into tears while reading these first chapters. I'm so looking forward to reading more of this.

Thank you tons for sharing. Great start! Very Happy smiley face

Ocean's Song: Part 1 · Mon Jul 09, 2007 1:27 pm

Update, pretty please...? I'm so looking forward to reading more. Smile smiley face

Unforeseen · Sat Jul 07, 2007 4:01 am

A very interesting start. I'll be watching this story Smile smiley face

Ocean's Song: Part 1 · Wed Jun 27, 2007 3:03 am

I asked for an update, and there it is. Lucky me Wink smiley face

Now, the tension between Legolas and Nestad and the emotion were palpable. I hope they find Gaerlinn soon.

Well done Smile smiley face

Ocean's Song: Part 1 · Wed Jun 27, 2007 1:37 am

Okay, where to start? Yesterday, I read the entire story in one go, and I'd like to tell you that you have a great talent for crafting an intriguing tale. I couldn't stop reading Smile smiley face

This is a very skilfully written story, and the characters are well developed. I can't wait to see what is going to happen. You gave us quite a cliffhanger in chapter 11, so yeah, please update soon Very Happy smiley face

Great stuff! Thank you for sharing Smile smiley face

Best wishes,
Binka

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