Reviews by RobinKa

Perturbation of Fate · Sat Oct 21, 2006 1:29 pm

Well, yes, he couldn't sail west because of the oath and because he was convinced he should guard something that had given him so much pain that he had cast it into the sea.

You captured the tragic dualism of Maglor's fate perfectly, in so few words.

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One Night · Thu Oct 12, 2006 9:58 am

First I want to say, OH YEAH! It's posted Very Happy smiley face

This chapter is fantastic, and I love every little bit. The scenes in the shops were funny and added much light to the dark mood the the previous night. Morwen, oh she was awesome Laughing smiley face

Then, the message and the subsequent talk with Gamling... I was sure that she'd confirm what he expected. Somehow, I didn't see any association with the events in the tavern in what Morwen was going to tell him. Poor Gamling though, it was so touching to see him want to be a father, and this was all in all very emotional scene (his hand on her belly Crying or Very sad smiley face

). But the end got creepy as well. Each time Grima's mentioned the atmosphere's getting tense.

More, please, soon Very Happy smiley face

One Night · Thu Oct 05, 2006 2:30 am

I knew it... I just knew it wouldn't be an undisturbed night. A demolished tavern, a whole bunch of infuriated Rohirrim, some more or less serious injuries, frightened women...

The conversation between Morwen and Eomer really gave me chills. Can't wait to see the next part.

Amazing work! Very Happy smiley face

The Hunter's Song · Sun Oct 01, 2006 3:13 am

Chapter 2: I just love this portrayal of Celegorm as a lazy teenager, musing and rambling on about his family and his own place in it while lying under the stars. Like every youth, he seeks for answers to help him shape his identity and purpose. He's so adorable Very Happy smiley face

I can picture him in my mind clearly. I also like how he describes his father and older brothers. And finally, he gets the sign he's been searching for Smile smiley face

Again, brava, and I'm eager to read more!

Until the End of Arda · Sat Sep 30, 2006 2:22 pm

Beautiful, poignant, classy... and worth giving five stars. Thank you for sharing.

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"Uh-Oh" · Tue Sep 26, 2006 6:44 am

I wish I could've seen their faces Laughing smiley face

Nicely done! Thanks for sharing.

The Hunter's Song · Mon Sep 25, 2006 2:26 am

Oh, this was just adorable, lovely beginning Smile smiley face

I really love how you portrayed a young boy who had to deal with welcoming his little brother into the family. His mind was full of doubts as he thought that no one would love him anymore. He felt so lonely and left out.

This reminds me how uncertain and angry I was when my brother was born. I can so relate to Maglor's feelings, because I, too, had to move in to another room, etc. Rolling Eyes smiley face