Reviews by Maria

Sleeping Beauty · Wed Feb 04, 2009 8:02 pm

Aaarrrggghhhh! Torture, torture I say!! You are so naughty you cliff hanging teaser!!!! * sits down take gulp in some air and clear her mind as she calms herself*
Once again you have written a very well 'THOUGHT' out chapter! Well done and congradulations. You have somehow made me almost go insane. O my goodness graciouness Young lady I almost fell off my seat. PLease stop the torture and update soon. I'll stock up on plenty of oxygen for this 'SURPISE' cliff hanger you may bestow on us again. And the wait. Ah! As I said before very well done this chapter. Please don't make me wait I could not take it. Ah!
Have a nice day!

Sleeping Beauty · Sun Jan 04, 2009 11:56 pm

Awwwwwwww...C'mon! You are so naughty! Please update before you leave. I am definitely saving this story into my archives of stories I have saved thus far. I just love reading all my favorites. In fact your story just might hit the top of the list of all stories favorites I have. This is definitely one of the best Sleeping beauties in a long time. Keep up the good work and ......'HURRY UP WITH THAT UPDATE!.....please!!!!!!! LOL!

Lost Out Of Time II, : The Coming Together · Mon Dec 01, 2008 10:26 pm

Eurecka! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! Squeal! Does happy dance! A Chapter a updated chapter! I am so out of breath and just excited. The story I have been waiting for just ended. Oh well got to hang on till the next time. I can't wait for the two to get together. And this is starting to get intense!! Till next time. *Takes out the push broom and starts cleaning up the confetti*

Sleeping Beauty · Mon Nov 10, 2008 1:09 am

SilentNiobe wrote: "I promise I will update as soon as I find some free time again!" Oh God I hope so! This is getting so exciting (jumps around giggling)!! This story I am going to have to save a couple of copies. One on paper, one on disk and one to my bookmarks, a couple to my facebook, LJ. etc....
Cause this is worth reading over and over again. Nice writing. Very believable with a the information you have brought here. Like you actually were the 'Alice' in this story. Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm! Will try to wait patiently for the next chapter.........................you got exactly ten minutes young lady! LOL! just kidding. Maria.

The Lost Ones · Wed Nov 05, 2008 11:24 pm

Hey I just found this story and I find quite interesting. Haldir and his companions trying to live in the desert? I thought it was funny that they could not bathe every day like they normally do. The had to opt with lotion instead. Poor Sabiya! She is in love with Haldir and fights her feelings as he does. Hey don't stop now with the writing. This is good and I would like to read more. Keep it coming.

Nightmare · Tue Sep 30, 2008 2:55 pm

Okay I stumbled onto this story when I was searching for something else to read on this site. I have read so many. But anyways I like this story and think you should continue. Don't worry to much about alot of things. It takes time to write a story let alone think of a plot line or two. Take your time (but not to long. LOL!) Don't overly criticise yourself because as they say 'you can be your own worse enemy' when it comes to criticism. Don't forget this is fantasy, not real so write the way you want. Also remember it is not only entertainment for others but for yourself as well. I like this story and wish for you to continue. Keep up the good work. Maria.

At the Mercy of a Burning Coal · Tue Sep 30, 2008 1:30 pm

Hey I just finished reading this very interesting story. I started a couple of days ago and just finished today at around 1:27pm on tuesday the 30th of Sept 2008. I could not stop reading this. It was very good. I hope you plan to write more in the future especially now that they will be doing the Hobbit starting in 2009 or 2010. You will have new reader who will want to keep lotr going. So consider writing another story. Job well done. Maria.

Sleeping Beauty · Sat Sep 27, 2008 8:50 pm

I hope that with the breaking of the chain with the pendant that all will not be lost. Maybe something finaly snaped in her when she saw or recognized it? I hope Legolas has not given up on her. Please I can't take the torture! But you know this is a really good story and I await the next update. Thanks for this story.

Elrohir's Tale · Sun Sep 21, 2008 7:42 pm

Okay I have now read this story seven times already and the sequel (very good story and I have it saved on my fav's) Love, love,love this story immensely. Your writing style is exquisite. Your knowledge in various areas makes this story like it is a true story. But on the second part, no there is not criticism here is the ending. What happened to the Carnal addition you promised. Waaaaaaaa! I want the Carnality ending. Big Fan.

Okay, NOW Panic! · Wed Sep 10, 2008 6:45 pm

Now this was a truly great chapter. I agree you have become a good writer and I will truly be looking for more stories from you in the future. that after I am done with this one and this one is obviously not done yet. Bring on the next chapter! I hope you don't mind but I would like to make a hard copy (paper) to take with me on long driving trips with my husband(I do not drive....yet)

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