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Leavetaking (G)
by NancyBrooke.
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Fri Aug 18, 2006 9:58 am
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| A perfect piece to fit the situation, this bitter/sweet leavetaking. The anticipation is there but so is the sadness, and in eleventy-one words! I'm always impressed by your drabbles and this is no exception. Brava! |
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Secrets (G)
by Khamul.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 15]
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Mon Aug 14, 2006 11:04 pm
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| Snerk. Okay... totally did not see that coming. A few spelling errors aside, I really got a kick out of this. I'll be waiting for the rest. |
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When Trees Are Bare (PG)
by Jael.
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Thu Jul 27, 2006 9:49 am
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| Wow. I teared up at multiple points, being quite a softie for men with children. I too thoroughly enjoy your Thranduil, who is a character I know little of. I will probably always carry this image of him- cuddling his baby son and defying the gods to take him away- in the back of my mind when I read other Thranduil-centered stories. The flashback was very nicely done, completely seamless, and the "minor" characters were distinctive personalities as well. What a wonderful reading experience! Thank you so very much. |
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These Same Walls (G)
by Lilan.
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Mon Jun 12, 2006 9:51 am
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| I was pretty impressed from the beginning since the esteem of each other their relationship is apparent immediately, but the last line both dropped my jaw and sent tears to my eyes. I didn't expect that at all and it greatly multiplied the emotional involvement for me. Very nicely done! Thank you for this piece. |
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Home Again (PG)
by Sulriel.
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Fri Jun 09, 2006 5:41 pm
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| How wonderful! This sounds like what I've always imagined the inner monologue of our cat to be, though she usually settles for an old flannel shirt instead of satin pillows. |
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Shopping with Grima and Saruman (PG)
by Khamul.
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Tue May 23, 2006 3:47 am
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Very clever ficlet. Now, for a twist of irony, I sat down to read this story with a dish of icecream in hand (Dutch Chocolate). I do have to say though that imho, the greatest torture of all icecream flavors has to be pistachio. 
Favorite line: "Unfortunetly, they couldn't find the same brand of warg food that they used last time, but Saruman didn't think the wargs would mind. If they didn't like the food, they'd just try to eat the nearest orc they'd find. That was a good way of eliminating weak orcs."
If I might offer a suggestion: stopping by the "beta pool" in the forums and finding someone to beta read (edit) for you may help with errors like misspellings and homophone misuse (in one place I noticed a 'to' where a 'two' was needed). Unlike the pet fish type, our betas don't bite. 
Again, fun ficlet. Thank you for it.
Very cute piece. I enjoyed it. |
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Never (NC-17)
by vladazhael.
Chapters [2]
Reviews [ 12] Warnings [Just sex, for now]
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Wed May 17, 2006 3:27 am
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Hooo... leeee... cow...
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Hearts of Home (G)
by Sulriel.
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Wed May 10, 2006 12:39 pm
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| I really, really like this one. The veterinarians pitching in with medical care is something so true (I've seen it first hand) yet something people often don't realize. I do have one question. Is Rociwyn Rohirrim or Gondoran? The name and occupation points me toward Rohan but it might be something to address further into the piece. Very enjoyable. Thanks so much for it. |
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Fun with Farm'n (PG-13)
by Sulriel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 12] Warnings [Orc humor]
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Sun Apr 30, 2006 5:47 pm
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| Well... didn't see that coming. Nicely done. |
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Just a Little Shove (G)
by inglor.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 13] Warnings [OOC Balrog Slayer and Lord of Rivendell]
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Thu Apr 20, 2006 1:40 am
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| Lol. You're right, I have wondered... Nicely done. |
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