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Walls With Ears (PG)
by Shanalir.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [4]
Warnings [Implied Adult Situation]
Fri Jul 08, 2005 1:16 pm
The first paragraph is great, I wouldn't change anything on it, but the last two seem a bit stilted and almost repetitious...But it is a very cute little vignette, little tweaking and you should be good to go. Your writing generally flows very nicely.
 

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Last edited by LadyofRohan on Sat Jul 09, 2005 8:28 pm
 
A New-Old Maid (PG)
by Shanalir.
Chapters [10]
Reviews [11]
Warnings [Mentions of body parts/personal matters]
Fri Jul 08, 2005 1:10 pm
I'm still picturing Dalfin squealing "Wheee!" riding Shadowfax down hills... Very Happy smiley face I can't wait to see where you go from here since she won't give up an accessory Wink smiley face Well done, very funny and well written.
 
 
"Arwen's Gift" and "The Reaction" (G)
by Shanalir.
Chapters [2]
Reviews [13]
Warnings [None]
Mon Jul 04, 2005 9:12 pm
That was cute! I can totally see the interaction between Elrond and his beloved daughter. And this was your first? Good work!
 
 
A New-Old Maid (PG)
by Shanalir.
Chapters [10]
Reviews [11]
Warnings [Mentions of body parts/personal matters]
Mon Jul 04, 2005 8:19 pm
Oh, how funny! And it is even better that you are wrote in such short drabbles? Drabble, New word to me, but I imagine it takes more skill to keep it so short and sweet! Twisted Evil smiley face
 
 
Playing Field (NC-17)
by dragonlady7.
Chapters [8]
Reviews [26]
Warnings [Smut. Language. Dirty.]
Mon Jul 04, 2005 7:33 pm
Wow, this was SO NOT what I was expecting....but I loved it! You made Lothiriel a sexy, horny, spoiled chick but kept her from being a mean, bitchy skank...well done! I will read this one again and again! Wink smiley face
 
 
Rider of the Mark (NC-17)
by ZeeDrippyVessel.
Chapters [49]
Reviews [188]
Warnings [blood, guts, and war. Oh yeah. And sex. Eventually]
Mon Jul 04, 2005 7:23 pm
This is a fantastic story. One of the hardest things to do (at least for me) is to show character development through dialog, and Zee, baby, you have that nailed! A pet peeve of mine is writing that tells you what the character is thinking and feeling rather than showing. Good dialog makes things come alive. You have taken a secondary character and made him come so much to life, I have started thinking of him as real... Where's the drooling smilie!? Wonderful romance and great sex scene. And thank god you have written characters that are mature enough to appreciate one another as mature human beings! I've written this review after chapter 21, PLEASE keep writing!!!!

Roh
 
 
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