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The Prophet (PG-13)
by Haleth.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [2]
Warnings [Gloomy]
Fri Apr 22, 2005 10:09 am
Excellent, Haleth! You use an unforced economy of words to great advantage - the man who can say so much here says only what he has to. I particularly liked that you didn't actually include the prophecy, only refer to it. This reads like a journal entry. Great. Going to go read it again, now.
 
 
In the Shadows (R)
by SpaceWeavil.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [11]
Warnings [implied sexuality]
Fri Apr 22, 2005 10:07 am
Very creepy ... just right. I particularly liked "cold as heartland rain" and that he only dreams of her thighs embracing him, hot her arms, her hands etc. Very stalker-y.
 
 
Time Heals (R)
by SpaceWeavil.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [12]
Warnings [hints at sexual stuff]
Tue Apr 19, 2005 2:58 pm
Wonderful - very incisive to use the timelessness of Eressea to express the timelessness of their love. Very expressive.
 
 
Perhaps Tomorrow (G)
by SilverMoonLady.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [5]
Mon Apr 18, 2005 10:14 am
Very good! I particularly liked how the objects find homes but Bilbo can't admit he has, and how finding a new book seems so accidental, as if it wasn't he himself who had wondered into the library Laughing smiley face . Your tone is respectful and fond all at once; almost as Frodo or Bilbo himself might have seen it - upholding and popping the foibles at the same time.
 
 
Filled With Sun (PG)
by SilverMoonLady.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Mon Apr 18, 2005 10:11 am
Lovely! So joyful ...
 
 
Mourning (G)
by Leila.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [2]
Warnings [none]
Mon Apr 18, 2005 10:10 am
Nicely envisioned, Leila; a new perspective.
 
 
The Shy Singer (G)
by Leaward.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [4]
Mon Apr 18, 2005 10:08 am
Very sweet; I love these little glimpses that teach me more about the characters I don't know so well.
 
 
A father's duty (G)
by rohanion.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [4]
Sat Apr 16, 2005 10:24 am
Hmmm ... maybe it's because I am a parent but I couldn't see the Evil here. Perhaps if it had been told exclusively from Estel's perspective.
 
 
Shelob: More Letters from Mordor (G)
by Viv.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [11]
Fri Apr 15, 2005 9:21 am
So funny! too many clever terms and twists to mention. Excellent job, Viv. Couldn't rate this highly enough.
 
 
Not Wholly Unwilling (R)
by picara.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [12]
Warnings [Questionable consent]
Wed Apr 13, 2005 10:01 am
I agree with the Mistress that you've found a great little plot niggle and teased it out very nicely. Your writing was very evocative here. The unconventional punctuation threw me off, though, particularly when you broke the batter with "ensorcelled" not being its own sentence.
 
 
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