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Fell Beast II (PG)
by SpaceWeavil.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 13] Warnings [silliness]
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Sun Mar 06, 2005 9:32 am
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| You wacky girl!! Very well done; the ordinary, day-to-day plot points in this story (walking the 'pet', flushing it, missing it, having to take care of it yourself ...) were so well dressed up in the Witch King's cloak I never recognized them until each punch line! So fun to read ... |
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Tongues of Gondor (G)
by Marta.
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Sun Mar 06, 2005 9:18 am
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| First rate piece of work, Marta. You've done a great job assembling information from diverse sources which, when brought together, show a convincing whole. Very informative and useful. |
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Bees, bread and Jam (G)
by frodo16424.
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Wed Mar 02, 2005 3:39 pm
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| Very cute. You certainly set the story well from the narrator's perspective - the beauty of the day, everyone feeling joyful and alive ... but I missed the characters a bit here - How was Elrond feeling? Was it usually his job to watch Estel? kids are so mercurial - what else might have been going on with Estel beyond just loving the day? And I think his reaction to getting stung (Inside the cheek!!) was awfully contained. My neighbor's five-year-old was stung last summer and still often asks before going outside (in winter) if there will be bees around. The swelling alone would be horrible. |
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The Days Grow Darker (PG)
by warriorelfmaiden.
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Tue Mar 01, 2005 9:09 am
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| I thought this poem had some lovely moments; particularly the first stanza, also "Stout friend/shrivelled guide", "I feel not a drop of life within me" and the image of impure gold. Much of it is recap, though; perhaps you could be more interpretive of events, rather than retelling? |
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An Oath Not Yet Fufilled (PG)
by DarkElvenPrincess.
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Sun Feb 27, 2005 5:31 pm
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| Intriguing start, but the OOC Elanor is disturbing - Going to the Havens on her own? Loving the Sea? Able to Swim?? Not even seemly behavior for a Took and that's saying something! |
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The Comfort Of Good Friends (G)
by SilverMoonLady.
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Sun Feb 27, 2005 5:22 pm
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| There is so much about this story to like ... that it's a marvelous and plausible gap-filler, the interplay between Sam and Merry - rarely (ever?) seen alone together, your writing ... but I think my favorite parts are the aphorisms and idioms you used/invented. They are fabulously original and perfectly appropriate - gave me an appreciative and jealous laugh every one! |
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Guiltridden (PG)
by DaughterOfApollo.
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Sun Feb 27, 2005 12:49 pm
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| Interesting! I thought you captured the confusion of dreams well. But, please, cut down those never-ending senences! |
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A Tookish Prayer (NC-17)
by Eyborg.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 9] Warnings [Sex]
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Thu Feb 24, 2005 2:26 pm
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| A very nice idea, Eyborg, well executed. Some of the more modern language passages threw me a bit, but otherwise thoroughly enjoyable. |
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Little Brothers (G)
by DinaLori.
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Tue Feb 15, 2005 8:43 pm
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I have loved this story for some time and am glad its posting here has given me a chance to reread it.
I continue to be impressed with how you introduce so many of these character's central themes - Faramir's sensitivity, the animosity between him and his father, Boromir's protectiveness - in such a simple and charming near vignette within a vignette. Still charming and thought provoking. |
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Harmony (G)
by Drew.
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Tue Feb 15, 2005 8:29 pm
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Congrats, Drew, on posting your first fic! This poem has some lovely turns of phrase: "Morning air flows through me" and "sun's how shower" in particular.
In terms of fan fic, however, I'd like to see it a little more rooted in Midde-Earth: without the summary, I wouldn't have known it was an Elf or Rivendell. |
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