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The Ring (G)
by Vilwarin.
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Tue Jan 10, 2006 9:26 am
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| Excellent twist! There I was, thinking 'Oh dear, she's gone and bent Aragorn all out of shape and made him snatch the One Ring,' but I couldn't have been more wrong. Great drabble; I loved it! |
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Heirs of the Downfall (G)
by Rous.
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Tue Jan 10, 2006 9:17 am
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Very wise and thought-provoking, and an interesting and unexpected interpretation of the theme as well. Well done! 
p.s. What's "Instant Drabbling"? |
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Planting Seeds (Drabble) (PG)
by Rous.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 9] Warnings [I will leave that up to you.]
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Fri Jan 06, 2006 12:07 pm
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Te he  Both with a twist and rather twisted! Thanks for the recommendation; I liked this a lot. |
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Heirs only get in the way (G)
by LadyBluejay.
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Fri Jan 06, 2006 10:48 am
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Well, I liked this a lot. Your use of vocabulary makes it very vivid and it was a great idea.  |
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Middle Earth Journals : Rumil (PG)
by Forest.
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Fri Jan 06, 2006 5:30 am
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I read them all, but this one's my favourite POV. Poor put-upon Rumil!
"Finally got chance to point bow at something. Chose fuzzy-footed Halfling who nearly wet himself. Feel v’important. Life is good" nearly made me spew my tea all over my laptop! V. funny stuff. |
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Oaths Foresworn (PG)
by Rhapsody.
Chapters [2]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [Character death]
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Thu Jan 05, 2006 1:14 pm
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| This is a truely moving and empathetic piece. I'm also so impressed that you can express so much in so few words (and also a little envious!). I think I told you in my newbie thread that it had been a while since I had read The Silmarillion. I haven't got around to re-reading yet, but this story has inspired me to get going with it. |
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Debbie Does the Fellowship (PG-13)
by GypsieRose.
Chapters [5]
Reviews [ 9] Warnings [Suefic!]
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Thu Jan 05, 2006 6:08 am
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| Not only very funny but very well written and put together. I agree with Viv. It's good to see Gimli getting some action in a het fiction for a change. |
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Bill's Evil Plan to Take over the World (PG)
by Julie327.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 28] Warnings [None]
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Wed Jan 04, 2006 3:15 pm
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| I've come a bit late to this one, but I thought it was fantastic! A great idea, perfectly executed. |
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Lend (Journey) (G)
by Rous.
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Tue Dec 20, 2005 5:19 pm
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Very sweet!
I'm a big fan of all things poetic, and I think this flows very well. |
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This Be Goodbye (R)
by LydiaB.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 6] Warnings [Bad language]
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Mon Dec 19, 2005 9:02 pm
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It seems I picked on a rather obscure poem, so I'll put the original here. Not only will my poem make a lot more sense, but you can also see how much of it I stole, and, after reading mine, sooth your poor aching head with a clever poem with perfect rhythm and exactly 8 syllables per line. I'm so jealous!
This Be the Verse
by Philip Larkin
They fuck you up, your mum and dad.
They may not mean to, but they do.
They fill you with the faults they had
And add some extra, just for you.
But they were fucked up in their turn
By fools in old-style hats and coats,
Who half the time were soppy-stern
And half at one another's throats.
Man hands on misery to man.
It deepens like a coastal shelf.
Get out as early as you can,
And don't have any kids yourself.
p.s. I think you're taking my disqualification comment a bit to seriously.  ops: |
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