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Reviews by WhoaNellie

StoryReview
World on Fire (NC-17)
by Lux.

Chapters [3]
Reviews [5]
Warnings [sexual situations, violence]
Thu Nov 30, 2006 10:14 am

Intriguing beginning, there's almost a 'Once and Future King' kind of dynamic between Gandalf and Young Aragorn in this first chapter. Are you intentionally paralleling Gandalf and Aragorn with Merlin and Arthur or is that just a figment of imagination? Anyway, interesting way to bring Mists of Avalon (cool story) into Middle Earth.

Warmest Wishes,
Whoa Nellie
 
 
Autumn Hunter (R)
by Rhapsody.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [7]
Thu Nov 30, 2006 9:54 am

Yum, you paint such delightfully erotic pictures in so few words. Very nice.

Warmest Wishes,
Whoa Nellie
 
 
Love Begotten (NC-17)
by Rhapsody.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [6]
Warnings [marital situation]
Thu Nov 30, 2006 9:51 am

What a magically erotic story of conception.

Warmest Wishes,
Whoa Nellie
 
 
A Moment Stolen (R)
by Rous.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [8]
Warnings [Not too smutty, but just in case...]
Tue Nov 28, 2006 11:18 am

A beautiful moment of marital happiness. Very sweet.

Warmest Wishes,
Whoa Nellie
 
 
It Flows for Thee (R)
by Viv.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [5]
Warnings [innuendo]
Tue Nov 28, 2006 11:15 am

Very cute, nicely played double entendre.

Warmest Wishes,
Whoa Nellie
 
 
Avoidance (G)
by trekqueen.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Sat Nov 25, 2006 10:16 am

This was a delightfully entertaining offering. Considering the way Lwaxana Troi had Picard hiding out in the holodeck during the episode "Manhunt," we can easily see her driving the good captain to this.

Warmest Wishes,
Whoa Nellie
 
 
A Father's Heart (G)
by sheraiah.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Warnings [Fluff warning]
Fri Nov 24, 2006 2:19 pm

We thoroughly enjoyed this very lovely piece.

Warmest Wishes,
Whoa Nellie
 
 
Fantasy (NC-17)
by Shanastay.

Chapters [10]
Reviews [10]
Warnings [Explicit sexual content]
Fri Nov 24, 2006 1:22 pm

Wow, just wow. Every intention of just reading a chapter at a time went out the window at the realization that you had done this from both of their perspectives in alternating chapters. The give and take between them was perfect and you kept the eroticism building throughout the piece. Good bits of relaxed humor between them, a wonderful work of erotica.

Warmest Wishes,
Whoa Nellie
 
 
Clash of Wills (PG-13)
by Fianna.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [2]
Warnings [violence]
Fri Nov 24, 2006 1:17 pm

Excellent beginning, with only a passing familiarity with Tolkien's universe, the story is easy to follow with strong characters and pulls the reader in by dolling out information in bits and pieces as the story unfolds. Looking forward to seeing where this goes and more of the battle of wills between Haldir and Ananynse and learning more about the shadows.

Warmest Wishes,
Whoa Nellie
 
 
Evening exercises (NC-17)
by Rhapsody.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [4]
Warnings [explicit sex]
Fri Nov 24, 2006 1:14 pm

Where's the rest? You stopped just as it was getting good. Very good build-up with a good balance of visual, emotional and physical description to weave a delightful (albeit far too short) a piece.

Warmest Wishes,
Whoa Nellie