Reviews by Sulriel

The Light I Hate; The Darkness I Love · Tue Nov 08, 2005 7:28 pm

This has a lot of powerful emotion for such few words. Well done in showing the beauty of the night - under the silvery moon and the stars where the Elves were made. - night creatures - before Melkor killed the trees and their light was set to burn in the heavens.

Boats to Build · Mon Nov 07, 2005 4:06 pm

Nancy, this is lovely. I especially enjoyed the emotion of the thought of making something with your own hands. Kudos to your grandfather for giving you these memories. I'm glad you shared them with us.

To The Sea · Mon Nov 07, 2005 9:17 am

I apologize I can't think of anything original to say - simply that I agree with above reviews. This is very enjoyable, I especially liked your well-drawn and complete characters, and well-woven plot. I especially love this kind of gap-filler, filling in the blanks Tolkien left us. Thanks for writing.

The Return of the King · Sun Nov 06, 2005 7:19 pm

I've read this before and thought I had reviewed it, but maybe elsewhere...?

anyway - quite enjoyable, you know I enjoy your style, and how you always treat the reader with some intriguing twist - that isn't really so much a twist as it is a quite sensible thought that comes from an unexpected direction.

Caranaear · Sun Nov 06, 2005 7:11 pm

A good start.

I love playing with the potential conflict inherent in the Curse of the Noldor, the impossible to balance Marring, the loss and destruction of the best there was ....

I'm interested to see where you go with this.

Suspicions · Sat Nov 05, 2005 8:44 am

I enjoyed this glimpse of Elrond and Faramir, both of them duty-bound even in the midst of the celebrations. I like that Elrond was able to give Faramir ease of mind and turn his perception of his talent from curse to gift.

Tempest · Fri Nov 04, 2005 10:13 am

How like the artist in the family to take the pain of them all and carry it - for how long ... ? unending? He's prepared for that I think. Well done.

The trouble with Pippin · Wed Nov 02, 2005 9:19 am

love this line >>The last thing you wanted was for a Took or a Brandybuck to get bored and start making their own amusements...

very cute fic, I enjoyed the teasing and conflict between Pip and Merry. The ref to a camel hair brush in the orchards has my mind going interesting directions Twisted Evil smiley face

Devil of Kindness · Sat Mar 19, 2005 1:18 am

Yikes *shivers* .... well-done ... (going to hide now.. from the darkness?? ... maybe on a sunny hilltop!)

How Many Years? · Thu Apr 08, 2004 5:19 pm

Marta, this is a wonderful, insightful work. I'm glad to see its deserved recognition in the Spotlight.

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