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Lucky Star (G)
by LuthienTinuviel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [Silly limerick, nursery rhymes]
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Wed Apr 13, 2005 2:16 pm
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| I like it Luthien. I would never guess that you wrote it quickly. I thought it flowed nicely and the rhyme was well done. I am just loving the poetry that's been around recently. |
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Not Wholly Unwilling (R)
by picara.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 12] Warnings [Questionable consent]
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Wed Apr 13, 2005 2:11 pm
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| I liked it. I have always been interested in the one elf that came closest to breaking all the rules in LaCE so I loved this topic. And I thought the 'questionable consent' was handled well too. To me, it flowed just fine--it was poetic actually. And I especially liked this line: "enchantment swirling in the mists." Great job! |
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The Master of the Mouth (G)
by Texasgirl.
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Wed Apr 13, 2005 2:04 pm
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| Great view of the Mouth of Suaron's thoughts. He would have to be pretty twisted to be who he was and you captured that well. |
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Khamûl (G)
by fadagaski.
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Wed Apr 13, 2005 2:01 pm
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| Ditto. I liked his fall from a man to Sauron's servant. Great job. |
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E-nlend uin Estel (G)
by fadagaski.
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Mon Apr 11, 2005 7:47 pm
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| Oh I really like this. Elrond's interactions with everyone were especially perfect but I liked how you portrayed all the characters. And there are alot of details in here that are very nicely done. And the writing style is very fluid and appropriate for the characters. I will definitely be watching this. Great job. |
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The Age of Men (G)
by Marta.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 3] Warnings [none]
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Sun Apr 10, 2005 3:14 pm
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| I love the Ents and I think you have captured them well. Nice job! |
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Under the Lonely Mountain Cold (G)
by Marta.
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Fri Apr 08, 2005 1:45 pm
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Marta said
> As for where you've seen it before ellisk, I've posted it at other sites before (SOA and HASA),
Sorry to use the reviews as a place for conversation but...you're right. I read it just a few days ago at SOA and left a review for it there too. That's why it seemed SOOO familar. Sure am relieved I'm not crazy. I do really love this one though. I can so see the dwarves singing this. |
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A father's love. (G)
by rohanion.
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Thu Apr 07, 2005 6:39 pm
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I have always loved the idea of Elrond and Estel having a close relationship like this. Great job! Poor frustrated little Estel. It would stink to have elves for 'brothers.'  |
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Under the Lonely Mountain Cold (G)
by Marta.
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Thu Apr 07, 2005 5:49 pm
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| Where have I read this before? I really like this. It flows very nicely and the rhyme is good. Great job! |
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Nan Elmoth (R)
by RobinKa.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 11] Warnings [Adult situations]
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Thu Apr 07, 2005 4:11 pm
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| I agree with the others. This is very evocative and passionate. And I love the imagery, especially the first line and "like a rainbow after wild rain" and nature images. Sonnets are really hard and I think you did a great job. |
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