Reviews by ellisk

The Trees Remember · Sat Jun 11, 2005 3:42 pm

This chapter was great! The elves' irritation at being left out of the planning was great and I was worried right along with them as to what was going on until you revealed it. And this sequence: Do you know what a Senator is?... I rolled at the answer. However, from the dialogue with the ambassador, Thranduil will be paying you a visit for refering to him as anyone's lap dog. Twisted Evil smiley face

And of course the end--you are growing far too fond of these cliffhangers. Update quickly. I just can't get over how much this story pulls me in. Smile smiley face

Kissing is Different · Wed Jun 08, 2005 7:57 pm

I have to say that I really liked this. I liked Eomer's little trick and the writing was clever. Good job. Pity it isn't a WIP.

Heaven On Earth (Drabble) · Wed Jun 08, 2005 5:45 pm

I agree with picara--I love seeing the world through children's eyes. It is always a delightful and educational experience. Nice job.

Seeing Stone · Wed Jun 08, 2005 5:43 pm

I really like it when you write your favs NB. What I liked about this was how much of Denethor's personality you showed through his reaction to this object. You conveyed an amazing amount about him in only 100 words. Great choice of topics for this challenge.

If ever you met me, you wouldn't forget me... · Wed Jun 08, 2005 5:40 pm

I always liked Sam's awe of the Oliphaunts so I think this is a good idea. And I agree with picara--you did a good job showing how incredible the experience was for him. Good job.

Grey Havens · Tue Jun 07, 2005 7:59 pm

Oh poor Cirdan! You portrayed that really well. I really liked him here-- a combination of heated Elven fury and an Elf wanting to disappear, as he said. I think that would be the reaction, alright. I can definitely see Cirdan this way. Elinel's father's reaction was great too--he's nice and calm and supportive until he hears the whole story. And I certainly would have freaked a bit hearing it too. The rivalry between Gil galad and Cirdan here is very interesting. So this is the penultimate chapter, huh? I'm sorry to hear that but I'm really interested to see what the final outcome is, so again, I hope your muse is inspired to write quickly. Great chap, Space!

Fell Beast III: Fluffy's First Flight · Tue Jun 07, 2005 7:47 pm

Oh Space, poor Fluffy's life just gets more and more twisted. Very Happy smiley face

Everytime I see the Nazgul's thoughts in these "Fluffy" pieces, they just crack me up. Everyone who has ever had a pet can finally identify with the Nazgul. Shocked smiley face

I'm glad you went with this one for the challenge. It was great.

Grey Havens · Thu Jun 02, 2005 5:08 pm

I loved the glimpse of Oropher, Thranduil and Celeborn (I'm sure that comes as a shock to you Smile smiley face

). I like seeing young Thranduil and his father. And the plot with Elinel and Ereinion--that was a very cruel place to leave us!! I certainly hope your muse decides to conjure the next chapter of this quickly or I might go insane. As usual, this is beautifully written, Space. Very Happy smiley face

Music of the Woods · Thu Jun 02, 2005 12:31 pm

I love the picture you have painted of Legolas enjoying the song of Fangorn's trees. Great choice of a topic for this challenge.

Danse Macabre · Mon May 30, 2005 1:10 pm

Ooo good topic for this challenge and well written. As a medieval scholar, the dance of death has always been one of my favorite themes. I like your portrayal of it here. I particularly liked "The Servant of Flame now writhed in slime and shadow." Great job.

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