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A Tangled Web (R)
by NiennaNir.
Chapters [38]
Reviews [ 104]
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Wed Mar 31, 2004 9:56 am
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 You would NEVER dissapoint me! I've just reread the whole thing...... and it's even better than all the other hundreds of times I've read it before  . I'm begging you to post on Saturday this week... cause Í leave on Sunday for ten days... (the torture! I won't be here for the other post... *gasps.... faints*) Well, it'll be waiting when I come back... that's a comfort... NOT! Oh dear! What am I gonna do?!? Anyway, I just reread the last chapter.. again and it's so great! *sighs* I wonder how it'll end up....... I have an idea, but then, you're so decieveing and misleading..... that I give up and I'll just read  By the way, ..... Erestor and Indelin? .... I mean... is he really her ...type? He seems so serious...? Also, can't wait to see how Elladan is gonnna get out of this one! *laughs*
PS - I know you only post every Sat / Sun and that I "watch" this story.... *grins sheepishly* but I check everyday......
PPS - WHY IS EVERY WEEK SO LONG SINCE Í'VE DISCOVERED THIS STORY?!? |
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The Teacher (NC-17)
by Ninde.
Chapters [54]
Reviews [ 81] Warnings [character death, het sex, non-con sex]
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Wed Mar 31, 2004 9:33 am
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I can't believe I'm the first to review! I just wanted to tell you that it's a great story, though there are three things I want to point out. First, in the first chapter, you introduce the elves and in the battle you just mention "two elves", which we later find out are the two guards. You should probably mention their names. Secondly, when you say they're going to bathe, you say that Elrond went wtih his two sons following, though wasn't one supposed to stay and guard? That scene was a little confusing. Thirdly, when you mentioned that he groaned.... welll I thought that Elrond would have... more control? Well, here are some ideas, and you may want to talk to your beta about them. (if you don't have one, check the beta board)
Anyway, I find this story captivating and I can't wait for more! It's got a lot of potential and great cliff-hangers at the end of each chapter! Keep writing!
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Amo et Odi, Excrucior (G)
by Julie327.
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Tue Mar 30, 2004 1:20 pm
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| Great imagery and descriptions! A very original piece and an exceptionally good insight to how he feels.... plus, it's succint.... and beautiful. |
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Elanor's Revenge (R)
by Julie.
Chapters [37]
Reviews [ 216]
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Tue Mar 30, 2004 1:14 pm
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| GREAT! I only hope that I won't have to wait that long again for an update..... The way you handled the archery contest was great. You captured emotions really well and gave off clear portrayls of the characters. Keep writing! (and in the name of Eru, don't take so long again to update.... please?) |
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Trust To Hope (PG-13)
by Novedhelion.
Chapters [36]
Reviews [ 302] Warnings [Not much to speak of, except your usual sappy roma]
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Tue Mar 30, 2004 7:04 am
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| HOW COULD YOU!?! Cut the story there? Holy Eru, it's not fair! Also, I was wondering how comes both of them suddenly.... are placid? I mean, at first they're both wild and independant..... but now? "There is always hope". Well, perhaps, but where in arda did it go? Cause I can't find it!?! Anyway, hope that her father overhears something between Lothriel and Ferwick... that way he could swing a few punches himself..... *giggles at the idea*... Well, I have to go... seeing that scene where Ferwick finally gets what he deserves over and over again! |
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A Tangled Web (R)
by NiennaNir.
Chapters [38]
Reviews [ 104]
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Sun Mar 28, 2004 4:16 am
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| A really great chapter! But I feel so sorry for Haldir................ Anyway, I wonder why Meril feels the way she does........ Also, the scene where Indelin left Elladan! A true friend! *laughs* Well, it's a great story, and I'm impatiently waiting for more! |
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Captured Heart (R)
by Maeluiril.
Chapters [39]
Reviews [ 64] Warnings [mentions of child abuse]
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Sat Mar 27, 2004 11:45 am
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| Just finshed chapter 30! It was great.... I wonder how it'll evolve this friendship.... and what her father is getting ready.... Well, keep writing! |
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A Tangled Web (R)
by NiennaNir.
Chapters [38]
Reviews [ 104]
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Thu Mar 25, 2004 1:20 pm
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Oh gosh! This is such a tangled web... and I'm dying for more........... Please?  : |
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Crimson Regret (R)
by EenaAngel.
Chapters [2]
Reviews [ 2] Warnings [Violence, mentions of rape]
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Tue Mar 23, 2004 11:09 am
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Oh my god....I't so sad.... and unfair. *silently crying* pleasekeepwriting............................  |
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A Tangled Web (R)
by NiennaNir.
Chapters [38]
Reviews [ 104]
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Tue Mar 23, 2004 10:50 am
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| Just reread the whole thing *giggles* cause I can't wait for more! |
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