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Of Fathers and Sons (PG)
by Kendra.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 6] Warnings [None]
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Mon Apr 25, 2005 8:14 pm
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| Very nicely done. I liked it quite a bit. Thank you for sharing. |
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The First Day (G)
by PearlTook.
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Fri Apr 15, 2005 6:34 am
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| Very well done. And quite what you would expect from Pippin. I think my favorite part was where he told Merry he would have to schedule killing him. Thank you for sharing. |
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You in Your Small Corner (G)
by SpaceWeavil.
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Tue Apr 12, 2005 8:07 am
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| This was featured again, so I read it, again. It still made me cry. It is so beautifully written and very real. The little things, like Faramir biting his fingernails, make this touching. Thank you, once again. |
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Winter Solstice (G)
by fileg.
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Tue Apr 05, 2005 4:26 pm
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| I am also surprised that there are no other reviews This is a very well written piece. It is a good study of Elrond and the thoughts that we are not privy to. This is worthy of many more remarks than it has received. Thank you for sharing. |
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Retribution (R)
by EveningNightshade.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 8] Warnings [Violence]
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Sat Apr 02, 2005 8:13 am
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Great story! This runs high with raw emotion. Too many want to paint the elves as emotionless; but, how could they be? The writing is superb. You may want to check out the second or third paragraph, though. The first line is repeated. I am not sure if it is intentional, but I could find no reason for it. And there is a fuzzy line at the end: "Elladan sighs. His brother has been like this often. He too has known and felt the same fury, but understand his weakness." I think it could be reworked to make a little more sense. It is not really clear who has known and felt the same fury, Elladan or Elrohir.
I agree with Viv. I think this would benefit from a little more polish. It is really outstanding as it is, but just needs a little something here and there.
Great read. Thank you for sharing.  |
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Too Late For Misgivings (G)
by shadow975.
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Fri Apr 01, 2005 7:15 am
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| Wow. That was amazing. The writing weaves a tapestry of emotion and doubts. This is truly a wonderful look into what may have been. Thank you for sharing. |
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Butterfly-Cocoon (PG)
by Rous.
Chapters [22]
Reviews [ 72] Warnings [Pretty much G-PG for violence]
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Thu Mar 31, 2005 11:38 pm
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Just an update if you are following this story. Part ll Chapter one had been posted. I wanted to post it first to my site, so it is there for a while, then I will post it here.
You can find it here:
http://www.freewebs.com/rous3/abutterflyeffect.htm |
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Middle Earth Journals : Rumil (PG)
by Forest.
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Mon Mar 28, 2005 2:31 pm
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| Not bad. As Cassie has stopped writing her diaries, now I know where to find some amusement. Great read. Thank you for sharing. |
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Untitled (PG-13)
by irishelf.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 1] Warnings [Should be one I guess]
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Sat Mar 26, 2005 12:24 am
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| I love it. This has 121 hits and no comments. Not very considerate. Anyway, I found it interesting. I do feel it needs a bit of back story. To me it feels like a moment from time, but not enough to relate. Maybe some expansion. How did it happen? When? You know, inquiring minds and all that. Thank you for sharing. |
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History Repeats Itself (PG)
by Emmess.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 9] Warnings [none]
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Tue Mar 22, 2005 10:44 pm
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| This was just delightful. I very much like the full circle you turned. I do agree that the dialogue was a little off in the first section, but it was still funny. However, a drabble is only one hundred words. I would just change the summary. This was well worth the sojourn into the story of the day. Thank you, so much, for sharing. |
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