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The Battle Hymn of Glorfindel (G)
by NiennaNir.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [25]
Warnings [rampant silliness]
Wed Jan 06, 2010 4:00 pm
No matter how often I read this, it still brings tears of laughter to my eyes. I would still suggest changing the second line in the second stanza to:

the follow, gasp and swoon and drool and want to be waylaid.

Just a suggestion.

rous
 
 
The Making of the Werewolves (G)
by IgnobleBard.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [2]
Warnings [None]
Tue Dec 22, 2009 7:01 am
Nicely written. A very good vignette to add to the lore of the fandom.

Thank you for sharing.

rous
 
 
Namaarie, Mellon nin (G)
by frodo16424.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [8]
Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:53 pm
Nicely done.

I do feel that the breaks in the poem about halfway through are awkward because of the flow. And, there is a problem with this line:

As he turned to go, he realized he was holding something was in his hand.

Otherwise, I like this a lot.

Thank you for sharing.

rous
 
 
Flooded (G)
by Cadiliniel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [1]
Wed Dec 02, 2009 6:19 am
A very nice glimpse into what the character should have shown in the movies. I was always bothered by his seeming lack of compassion for his son; this shows that he did have deep feelings.

Thank you for sharing.

rous
 
 
First Sight (PG-13)
by Marta.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Mon Nov 30, 2009 6:56 am
So nicely done. I love the language and the images. Very in tone with the setting of the original stories.

Thank you for sharing.

roue
 
 
Tempest (G)
by LuthienTinuviel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Mon Nov 16, 2009 3:23 pm
Very nice little drabble.

I do have a couple of points, though.

...and walk a wanderer's pilgrim forever.

I really think that pilgrimage is a much better word here.

And it is all my fault. My own to blame.

This line...I am not sure why it sticks out, but it does. I know it is the second part, but I can really offer no suggestions.

Thank you for sharing.

rous
 
 
Here's to a Whole New Yule (G)
by NancyBrooke.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [14]
Warnings [general foolishness]
Sat Nov 14, 2009 8:20 am
These were featured once again. And, once again I was left rolling. I truly wish you had written more; they are priceless.
 
 
Lessons Learned (G)
by karushna5.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [12]
Warnings [Aragron]
Mon Nov 02, 2009 10:14 pm
Caught this on the featured story. I did not remember reading, but was just as impressed as the first time.

Thank you, once again.

rous
 
 
Living Motion (PG)
by NancyBrooke.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [6]
Warnings [reference to violence]
Fri Oct 30, 2009 11:24 pm
Very nice. I am not as familiar with the characters here, but I do appreciate the telling.

Thank you for sharing.

rous
 
 
Letters in the sand (G)
by Rhapsody.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [7]
Fri Oct 30, 2009 6:50 am
Nicely done.

Thank you for sharing.

rous
 
 
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