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A Pretty Toy (R)
by mistressofbucklebury.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 5] Warnings [None that I can think of]
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Sun Oct 31, 2004 11:25 am
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| Ditto on the above. I like the style and so far the content. Very interesting. I, too, will be watching this. Thank you. |
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Morgul, The Loan Shark (PG-13)
by Hathor.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 13] Warnings [Some swearing and general silliness]
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Sat Oct 30, 2004 9:23 pm
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Too funny. I think we need more "obscure empoyment" opportunities in ME. Could you conjure up another one? Thank you for your insomnia. It works for us.
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Someone Else's River (G)
by Halfwest.
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Thu Oct 28, 2004 6:03 am
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Ooooo. Unusual rhyming scheme. It really flowed, once I caught on to it, like the rivers. Great imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
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A Better Father There Never Was (G)
by Thevina.
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Tue Oct 26, 2004 5:52 am
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Great story. Well written and detailed. I can imagine carrying on the same conversation with my step-father. Including the cigar. LOL. Thank you, very much.
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Dreamcatcher (G)
by saborice.
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Mon Oct 25, 2004 5:20 am
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| Nice piece, but the term "dreamcatcher" confused me. I would not think that it would be used in ME. Otherwise, I enjoyed it. Thank you. |
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In Which Frodo makes a Discovery (NC-17)
by MysteriousWays.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 3] Warnings [For Explicit Sexual Content]
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Sat Oct 23, 2004 7:57 am
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| Great. Humorous without being too much so. Just the way lovers would be. Thank you. |
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The Eight Commandments (PG)
by BoomBoom.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 14] Warnings [none]
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Fri Oct 22, 2004 9:06 am
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I, also, did not realize that there were different ways to use "blond/blonde". Most of the other stuff, yeah, basic grammar. "Its" as opposed to "it's". "There" for "they're". Or "their". Bad grammar and spelling will stop me cold.
And I smiled at your comment on summaries. "I suck at summaries". Well, if you suck at telling me what the story is about, then you probably suck at telling me the story, also. I cannot believe the things posted elsewhere.
And the reviews are just as bad. While my things may be mediocre, I think that for the most part, they are at least in line spelling and grammar wise. And it really takes so little effort, in the grand scheme of things. Run the check programs. That is what they are there for. And then I read them aloud. Several times. Until teh looks really good to me. LOL. Then off to the beta. (And it tickled me pink to find she missed ONE mistake. Of course, I could not let that lay!)
Another sub-commandment you could add, space between your paragraphs and dialogue lines. I have quit reading stories because it was just too hard to distinguish the breaks. My eyes do not work well with the computer screen as it is, I am not going to try to concentrate on deciphering the story form. Thank you for sharing this. I actually think I will use some of the suggestions. Cannot hurt. 
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There is No Soap in Ladros (PG)
by Halfwest.
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Fri Oct 22, 2004 8:28 am
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Great! I loved it. Men! Thanks.
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Angel Eyes (G)
by saborice.
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Fri Oct 22, 2004 12:57 am
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| I did not see the relevance to ME. Although it is a good piece, on its own. I agree with Viv. Good original. Thank you for sharing, though. |
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In the Fire's Glow (NC-17)
by Kendra.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 5] Warnings [Sexual Situation]
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Wed Oct 20, 2004 11:14 pm
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| Well written. Tastefully done. Thank you. |
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