Reviews by Talasi

Fighting The Fall · Sat Oct 09, 2004 8:49 pm

Off to a very good start. I agree with Moralanqua...only a few minor things. Please update soon. Glorfindel doesn't get near enough attention!!

Talasi

For Thine is the Glory · Sat Oct 09, 2004 8:30 pm

Hey there. Things finally settled enough for me to get caught up. That Jan really is hellbent on running away. I do understand her hesitancy to trust anyone at all. It is also an interesting change from the woman who lands in Middle Earth and instantly befriends and falls in love with an elf.

Keep it up!!

Talasi

My Twisted Road to Life: Through A Mirror Darkly · Wed Aug 18, 2004 11:04 am

Yay! *dances around* As always, wonderful chapter. I like how you described the recognition of her distant look by Glory. Can't wait to see what happens when she wakes up. Please update soon!

Talasi
*back to the craziness that is now my life*

The Forsaken · Thu Aug 05, 2004 2:28 pm

*sporting goosebumps head to toe* In spite of the preview of this chapter I got last night, I still have goosebumps reading it again this morning!!! You so captured everything just the way it was happening and the way it felt. The music is perfect....of course you know that, since you gave me the CD.

Of course, nobody writes elfsmut like Shanastay, so that was excellent as well. The 3-minute elf thing was great.

I'm so glad you finally found time to update this story which is so endearing to me.....especially right now. The way Erestor responded to Tia was so subtley wonderful!

Can't wait to see what's next....but I guess I will have to.

Talasi Very Happy smiley face

Heart of a Warden · Mon Aug 02, 2004 5:19 pm

I am really enjoying this story. Dara and Rumil are both so stubborn! I love how Haldir stepped in to make his little bro get healing and rest. Those 2 are just perfect for each other. This side of Rumil is just so sweet, and of course his reactions to her state of undress were cute too. I look forward to more as soon as possible. Very Happy smiley face

Talasi

Two Too Much to Handle? · Thu Jul 29, 2004 2:02 am

Well damn! Those 2 just can't stay out of trouble. *considers putting elves over knee for a spanking* Her reaction to waking up alone was very touching and absolutely justified.....though I can't blame those 2 for hiding in the bathroom when Glory started pounding on the door.

They will have to do some smooth talking to calm her down and reassure her. Then they need some serious make-up sex. (Don't waste your breath. I know I'm warped.) She has had a rough go and has gotten the shaft too many times (not literally). She should never have to wake up alone again like that.

Of course, as usual.....this was brilliant. I really like how you brought this aspect of self doubt and uncertainty into the situation. I definitely did not see it coming. The final anger was sort of surprising, but when put in context makes complete sense. I look forward to their grovelling and how they make it up to her.

Tal

My Twisted Road to Life: Through A Mirror Darkly · Wed Jul 21, 2004 12:32 am

You know what I think....but I'll tell you again anyways. LOVE IT! I hate cliffhangers, but this is an excellent addition to a wonderful story! At least she is ME now. Whew!

The twist of English not being Westron puts another spin on things too. Could things be more complicated for poor Jan? I think not. Pretty good idea......if I do say so myself. Very Happy smiley face

The realization that they are picking up on each others thoughts and feelings is also well portrayed. You get across how confusing it is for both of them.

Of course, Jan's sense of humor just kills me. "Hello. Kinda dead here." ROFLMAO Always and forever a smart ass. Flipping off the Valar was priceless too. Typical Jan. Can't imaging where she gets that from. *looks at Shana*

Talasi
Haldir Worshiper, Craig Parker swooner, and Keeper of Erestor's Heart Laughing smiley face

(PS: Notice my new location?)

My Twisted Road to Life: Through A Mirror Darkly · Fri Jul 09, 2004 12:49 am

Yay! *dances around* Shana updated! Very Happy smiley face

Stunning descriptions! While I can imagine how confusing it is for the elves, and even Legolas who is seeing this, I am not lost myself. Quite an accomplishment to confuse and simplify at the same time. Their reactions are realistic. The parts that come through Legolas are just enough to confuse the elves and clue us in on what he is seeing.

(Of course, I also love being in the credits, especially when I am tossed over the shoulder of an elf and carried off to do naughty things......GO ME Exclamation smiley face

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*Bows to the mastah* Bow smiley face

Tal

For Thine is the Glory · Tue Jul 06, 2004 12:38 pm

Yay!! *jumps up and down celebrating* Finally!! I miss you now that you work so much. Happy Birthday too!

I love how she has managed to knock the legendary Balrog slayer on his ass twice now. hee hee Twisted Evil smiley face

Her reaction to being summarily dropped into Middle Earth is very realistic.....especially for someone who has been through what she has. Definitely NOT Mary Sue!!!! Glory's reaction to the aroused state this causes is great. I really, really like what you are planning for the 2 of them.

Legolas' reaction to the zipper was absolutely hilarious. It really is quite ingenious, isn't it. The two of them snuggled up was so sweet as well. awwwwwwww

Talasi (Shanastay addict)

Haldir and the child · Thu Jun 17, 2004 3:38 pm

Yet another perplexing chapter. Very interesting. My interest is sparked.

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