Reviews by ViJanaway

Enlightenment · Wed Oct 13, 2004 1:39 pm

Typos seem to the bane of all storytellers.
The grammar can be fixed
this was a really good idea...well-cone

Can You Hear Me? · Sun Oct 10, 2004 10:04 pm

this is gentle and very sweet

Mists of Beleriand · Wed Oct 06, 2004 6:40 pm

So very caring of Cirdan. it is gentle, sweet, and true. Cool smiley face

Fighting The Fall · Tue Sep 28, 2004 9:09 am

I agree with everything Moralenqua said. The beginning is nice and easy. I want to read more

More Than This · Sun Sep 19, 2004 5:44 am

This is so very warm and loving. Sam and Frodo....friends forever.
Such a lovely, pastoral-like setting. I like it a lot. Smile smiley face

Halls of Mandos · Thu Sep 16, 2004 1:29 pm

I think you did very well. You caught the character of Haldir the way I think of him. Cool smiley face

The Spectre at the Feast · Fri Sep 10, 2004 7:30 am

So very good. Not maudlin, or sappy...just...beautiful.
Made me cry. Sad smiley face

Adrift · Thu Aug 19, 2004 8:12 pm

I think you did well getting into his head and letting us know about the price of war from his thoughts.
Thank you.
Vi

Winter Remembrance · Sun Aug 15, 2004 5:59 pm

Sheriah
You are the absolute best chronicler of the Mirkweek Royal Family. I love this one.
Vi Smile smiley face

A Blessing and a Burden · Thu Aug 12, 2004 10:47 pm

Very nicely done More and more I like the pairing of Legolas and Eowyn. Cool smiley face

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