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Smoke and Fire (PG)
by Anso.
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Wed Oct 20, 2004 2:33 pm
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This is a nice piece. It's interesting to see a story written in second person. It makes it different, and you managed to keep it up throughout, which is great. I particularly liked the descriptions towards the beginning, of the oliphaunts and army of Sauron attacking 'as one large, menacing organism'.  |
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Dreams (NC-17)
by Emmess.
Chapters [5]
Reviews [ 20]
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Mon Oct 18, 2004 11:52 am
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| I like this. It's a very different and effective way of treating a scene like this, and it worked really well. |
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Worries on a Wedding Night (R)
by Frigg.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 2] Warnings [Adult scene at the end]
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Mon Oct 18, 2004 11:03 am
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| Very nice piece, and the English was fine as far as I could see. I particularly liked the conversation between Aragorn and Imrahil. |
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Middle Earth Journals: Orophin (PG)
by Forest.
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Mon Oct 18, 2004 10:58 am
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Good one. Like how it ties in with your other 'diary'. So when do we get Haldir's?  |
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The Problem of Curufinwë (G)
by Noldo.
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Sun Oct 17, 2004 12:12 pm
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| I think this is an excellent essay; your views come across as objective and well thought out and I appreciate the way you justify each comment with an excerpt from the actual text, rather than just throwing opinions about. Your style is readable and intelligent. I will admit that I am not an expert on the Silm or on Fëanor, but I have always liked the different sides to his character, and I think you examined this ably. Well done |
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Middle Earth Journals : Rumil (PG)
by Forest.
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Wed Oct 13, 2004 9:39 am
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Poor squishy the lizard! I was starting to really take to him. I had visions of a whole series of fics... Seriously though this really appealled to my silly sense of humour. I was going to single out a couple of lines that really struck me as funny, but there are too many. I hope you do more of these.  |
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The Mark of a… Warrior? (PG-13)
by Ariel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 11] Warnings [Crude Humor]
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Sat Oct 09, 2004 5:36 pm
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| This is funny. Can I just ask how you got this idea? Though I agree, a group of blokes probably would end up doing that. |
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Solitary Mortal (PG-13)
by Thoronsil.
Chapters [4]
Reviews [ 2] Warnings [battle sequences, emotional drama]
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Fri Oct 08, 2004 11:23 am
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| I'll be honest and admit now that I don't kow much about the story of Beren and Luthien, as its a long time since I read that part of the Silm, therefore I can't really say anything about canon or such. What I will say though is that I really like the language you use. It has a very dark and poetic feel to it, and is enjoyable to read, even for someone like myself who has no real knowledge of the subject matter. |
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The Return of the Ring (PG-13)
by SheElf33.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 2] Warnings [Mild Violence; Mild Language]
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Fri Oct 08, 2004 11:14 am
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| This is an interesting idea and the beginning of quite an exciting story, I feel. The only problem I found is that you switch tenses frequently throughout the story, but that is a problem that could easily be sorted out by a beta reader. Try the beta forum, perhaps, as there's always someone around there willing to take a look at a story and pick out little things like that. I think with that seen to, this would be a very good story indeed, and I'm already interested enough to see what happens next. |
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The Forest of Mirkwood (G)
by Arandil.
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Tue Oct 05, 2004 7:52 pm
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I thought it was Seuss...so obviously you did well to emulate the style since I could tell Very clever and witty.  |
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