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The Wedding Dress - An Untamed Tale (PG)
by L8Bleumr.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [1]
Warnings [mention of a m/m couple only.]
Sun Nov 13, 2011 2:04 pm

I have to start with an apology for not reviewing the other stories in this saga - I'm a bad reader! Next - I love this saga! I especially like how you've tied Journey of a Butterfly into little moments of the Taming the Wild stories. As a reader, I love those little tie-ins. And, finally, I have to admit that one of the reasons I'm reviewing this particular story is that I'm confused - isn't Antien with Alya? Did I miss something? It's entirely possible that I did, and I apologize if that's the case. Either way, thank you for sharing these stories - they are a pleasure to read and I look forward to enjoying more of them in the future. Smile smiley face
 
Author's replied on Mon Nov 14, 2011 11:50 pm
Thanks for your review. I don't get many on this site. All of my stories are on another site and I wanted to expand by posting here as well.

I have to apologize about the confusion with Antien. I changed Taming because this site does not allow slash. I am not a slash writer, but Antien and Glandur are acutally a couple. I made up Alya just for this site and quite frankly, I got tired of having to rewrite their scenes for Journey. There is never anything explicit between them. It's just a known fact that Antien and Glandur are a couple. Still, I wanted to abide by the rules here, but I guess if there is nothing too telling it might be alright. So just to be sure, anything from here on out will have Antien and Glandur together the way I originally wrote it. Sorry about the confusion and I really appreciate you're review. I hope you'll keep reading.
 
In The House of Elrond (PG)
by Aearwen2.

Chapters [11]
Reviews [12]
Sat May 21, 2011 10:58 pm

I've read this story many, many times. I love your writing style and your take on an angle less explored. The characters are rich and leap off the page. I can't wait to read this to its conclusion! Smile smiley face
 
 
Drummer (R)
by LadyBluejay.

Chapters [14]
Reviews [34]
Warnings [None]
Mon May 04, 2009 11:58 pm

I loved Tide of Destiny, and this one has me hooked as well. Love the character development, the descriptions, and am looking forward to more!
 
 
Tide of Destiny - Part One:Choices (R)
by LadyBluejay.

Chapters [35]
Reviews [32]
Warnings [Angst ; Character Death]
Sun Nov 23, 2008 10:22 pm

This update was *perfectly* timed! After a long day of studying for finals, thank you thank you thank you! I've been following this story since early on, and it's one of my favorite stories on this site. Looking forward to the next update! Smile smiley face
 
Author's replied on Tue Nov 25, 2008 1:38 pm
Thanks for reviewing - great you are enjoying the story - I will try and get on with the next chapter. LBJ
 
The Greater Good (PG-13)
by BellemaineChercoeur.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Sun May 06, 2007 8:13 am

This is how the movie should have ended. This is how Padme should have been portrayed - a broken, yet resilient woman, rather than a weak, completely broken girl. Great characterization and writing.
 
 
Absolution (R)
by ChristineX.

Chapters [5]
Reviews [17]
Warnings [Explicit sex]
Sat Apr 14, 2007 11:10 pm

Intriguing start. Smile smiley face

You write very well, and this story has the potential to go almost anywhere - which is nice. Smile smiley face

Please update soon.
 
 
Smoke and Shadow (R)
by Selene.

Chapters [25]
Reviews [15]
Sat Jan 20, 2007 12:27 pm

Oh you must update quickly after this cliffhanger! Smile smiley face

I like how you've portrayed them growing to know and care for one another. It's a realistic view of how an arranged marriage with so much riding on it could play out. Please update quickly. Smile smiley face
 
 
By the Sea (R)
by Fyalee.

Chapters [22]
Reviews [144]
Warnings [Adult themes, angst]
Thu Feb 23, 2006 5:45 pm

Oooh, yay! A quick update! My favorite kind of updates. Smile smiley face

Very well written as always. I like how you showed the relationship between Eomer and Aragorn. Hopefully Aragorn will be able to help the poor man regain some of his memories. And, for me at least, you're not moving too fast with the relationship between Eomer and Lothiriel.

Again, thanks for such a quick and wonderful update. I'm very much looking forward to the next one. Smile smiley face
 
 
By the Sea (R)
by Fyalee.

Chapters [22]
Reviews [144]
Warnings [Adult themes, angst]
Fri Jan 13, 2006 4:45 pm

Fyalee:

Just dropping a quick line to say I love this story (still) and am waiting to see what happens next. I hope all is well with you and if writer's block is the problem that it leaves you immediately! Smile smiley face Just thought I'd give a small bit of encouragement if it was needed. Looking forward to the next update. Smile smiley face

derakh
 
 
To Become a Queen (PG-13)
by Madeleine.

Chapters [2]
Reviews [18]
Warnings [highly annoying brothers]
Sun Dec 11, 2005 10:26 pm

Another wonderful chapter! I actually made a noise of protest when I reached the end because I wanted more. I cannot wait to read Eomer's response! And if he's that skilled at removing a GLOVE.........yeah, need I finish that thought? Wink smiley face

As usual, beautiful writing and characterization. This series is one the best Eomer/Lothiriel pieces on this site. Anxiously waiting for the next chapter. Smile smiley face