Reviews by Shanalir

By the Sea · Mon May 23, 2005 6:24 pm

Oh wow. I was wondering how you'd handle Eomer finding out that Lothiriel doesn't love him. I like the way you did it! Having her point out that they didn't even talk together before they were married was a very good touch. It brings the honest emotion to the fore. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work! Wave smiley face

My Hope, Returned · Sun May 22, 2005 5:21 pm

Saw this as the story of the day and had to check it out. I like it a lot. It's a very nice view on what their courtship might have been like, as well as a view on what their recoveries might have been. I like the union you've portrayed, as well as the sense that it would grow deeper as the relationship progressed.

By the Sea · Sun May 22, 2005 4:33 pm

Oh, I am enjoying this story. You are doing an excellent job. I'm really liking the way you slowly build the inter-character tension. Looking forward to the next chapter!

By the Sea · Thu May 19, 2005 10:02 am

I definitely like the new chapter. I'm curious to see how long it will take Eomer to come out of his happy fog, and realise that all is not as he had hoped, in his new marriage. I'm also wondering how long it will be before Lothiriel asks or confronts him on his (apparently) dual personality. I'm eagerly looking forward to the next update.

By the Sea · Thu May 19, 2005 10:02 am

I definitely like the new chapter. I'm curious to see how long it will take Eomer to come out of his happy fog, and realise that all is not as he had hoped, in his new marriage. I'm also wondering how long it will be before Lothiriel asks or confronts him on his dual personality. I'm eagerly looking forward to the next update.

Tel' Lindar (The Bard) · Wed May 18, 2005 7:50 am

I love the new chapter. So glad you finally got it up. Thank you! I'll be watching eagerly for the next one!

By the Sea · Sun May 15, 2005 10:06 am

You have an interesting start. I don't think I've seen any that viewed Eomer and Lothiriel's situation quite like this. I'll be watching this one.

(BTW, if you haven't already, why don't you pop over to the forums and post a Newbie thread. It'll give everyone a chance to welcome you to the site, and there are a lot of us that love to welcome new members. It's only a suggestion, mind.)

Dreams · Sat Apr 30, 2005 4:55 pm

I read this story while I was a lurker still, and never got around to reviewing it before now Surprised smiley face

ops: I love this. it was amazing and actually believable. It had a sense (for me) of being one of those things that could actually happen. All in all, I loved reading it, and will probably be revisiting to reread often.

History Repeats Itself · Sat Apr 30, 2005 4:51 pm

I just ran accross this fic, and I'm so glad I stopped to read it! ROFL smiley face

I love it. I could see my husband there so easily (especially since he tried to curse me with octuplets when I got pregnant with our son. I was so glad to find out that there was only one baby!)

Do not go gentle into that good night · Wed Apr 27, 2005 6:22 pm

Love the new chapter. Post again soon, please! I am really loving this fic!

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