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Sightseeing (G)
by Vilwarin.
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Tue Mar 06, 2007 4:18 pm
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| Tee Hee!! |
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The End of Arnor and Angmar, the North Rivals. (PG)
by SAURON.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 2] Warnings [LOTR History Spoilers]
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Tue Mar 06, 2007 4:16 pm
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Interesting perspective; a while ago we had a challenge here to write about a "Tragic/Stupid/Crazy Guy". This story would have fit right in. Poor foolhardy Arvedui!
Please take a moment to reformat it, though, it is very difficult to read. And look into getting a Beta reader. Your work is rife with typos. |
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Green (G)
by Lilan.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 2] Warnings [None]
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Tue Mar 06, 2007 4:10 pm
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| Very nice - How Faramir! to notice every detail of the spring even while ambushing the enemy. |
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Divided (PG-13)
by Pen52.
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Thu Mar 01, 2007 4:32 pm
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| Excellent story, Pen - great characterizations, the voices of each wonderully individualized, and you really found a wonderful moment of convergance I haven't seen explored (or even pointed out) anywhere else. Really great. |
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The Door to Narnia (PG-13)
by Cuthalion.
Chapters [2]
Reviews [ 1] Warnings [none in particular]
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Sun Feb 18, 2007 9:25 am
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| I thought these very good, Cuthalion, the first especially. You give Susan and the reader such a visceral experience, the rhythm of the event and of her own body so intertwined - you create great tension there, and then bring it down to such a simple but devastating result - that her newborn faith trickled: something small, and fragile, just slipping away. Very effective. |
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October Twilight (PG-13)
by VanatheEverYoung.
Chapters [16]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [Violence; Mild Language; Mild Sexual Situations]
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Tue Feb 06, 2007 5:35 pm
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| I have been procrastinating for days now over writing a final review for this story, but I really can't find an adequate way to express just how very much I have enjoyed reading it. I'm thinking of printing it out and putting it on the shelf next to my HP novels. I waited eagerly for each and every chapter, and sometimes stopped halfway through to draw out the experience and stay in Dorcas's world as long as possible. I loved all your characterizations of the young OoP members, but Dorcas the most. You managed a nice balancing act between her cleverness and self-ignorance which was compelling and endearing, and I was truly moved at your conjuring of life during wartime - a poignant reminder of what many face in the real world everyday. The ceremony at Hogwarts recognizing those students killed over break was particularly sad and touching. |
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Last edited by NancyBrooke on Tue May 08, 2007 4:21 pm |
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Son of Gondor (G)
by PipMer.
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Tue Feb 06, 2007 1:27 pm
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| This was a loving tribute to Gondor and its favorite son. |
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October Twilight (PG-13)
by VanatheEverYoung.
Chapters [16]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [Violence; Mild Language; Mild Sexual Situations]
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Tue Jan 09, 2007 11:51 am
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| Vana, this is terrific. I am really impressed with your seamless entry into J. K. Rowling's world, but most of all with your restraint: Dumbledore says only what's necessary, and your characters act and interact only to enrich the story. Your Dorcas is a wonderfully full character, with no heavy notes at all. I will eagerly await more. |
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Smoke and Shadow (R)
by Selene.
Chapters [25]
Reviews [ 15]
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Tue Jan 09, 2007 11:36 am
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| This is going really well, Selene. Your imagination of Rohan is extraordinarly deep and broad, as our your characterizations of Lothiriel and Eomer. I am eager to see where you take this. |
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Aftermath (PG-13)
by Vilwarin.
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Wed Jan 03, 2007 11:02 am
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| Very nice, Vilwarin. I especially enjoyed coming unexpectedly to the limit - if I can call it that - of Halbarad's ability to comfort Aragorn. We are appropriately reminded that even seasoned warriors can rue killing. |
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