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Hoping and Watching (PG-13)
by SilverMoonLady.
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Tue Oct 11, 2005 10:03 am
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| These are wonderful, Sil - the second especially. I loved the juxtaposition of Pippin standing so stalwartly and determined to guard such a precious and ethereal thing. |
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A Little Lesson (R)
by SilverMoonLady.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 3] Warnings [suggestiveness an of adult nature]
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Tue Oct 11, 2005 10:01 am
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| Very clever! I love this image of Frodo, so masculine but essentially still the gentlehobbit - at home with his books and writing - we so often imagine him. |
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Could Will Have Its Way (PG)
by NancyBrooke.
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Mon Oct 10, 2005 7:09 pm
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Rous said
> In the line "Impotent was my power, futile my foresight, darkness my vision" I am not sure darkness is quite right. I see just dark as working better here. JMHO.
Author's note: I used the noun rather than the adjective to say what he saw, not what it looked like, i.e. he saw darkness itself, not something dark, or nothing at all. |
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Knowledge is Power (G)
by nienor.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 5] Warnings [none]
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Sat Oct 08, 2005 10:57 am
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| Nice! I like how his obsession grows from the start of the drabble and explodes at the end. I knew it was Saruman - great characterization! This was excellent. |
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A cursed Sword (G)
by Vilwarin.
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Wed Oct 05, 2005 12:02 pm
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| Great, Vilwarin! This is exactly what I hoped this challenge might inspire - a different look at things. How interesting to think of Aragorn as so attached to Anduril. It must have both chased him and lead him: "You have to be important, you have the sword ..." and "I'm important, see? I have this sword!" - stick and carrot. Really thought provoking. |
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Silver & Gold (PG)
by simon22cat.
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Mon Oct 03, 2005 4:47 pm
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What has he got in his pocketses? 
An interesting and poignant tale, Simon. I especially liked that you chose to examine this small but vital moment in the text. |
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Glor Fin (NC-17)
by ellie.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 3] Warnings [sexual situations]
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Mon Oct 03, 2005 4:43 pm
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| This is an interesting interpretation. I liked how you turned the symbology into actual erotic elements. |
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Gathering of the Fellowship (PG)
by domeair.
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Mon Oct 03, 2005 4:38 pm
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| I think you might consider recategorizing this an AU story. It's very self-aware, which I found distracting, our heroine lives in a very unusual Rohirric house for all those books, and I can't imagine any magic in ME that could make an adult character remember a time just six years before when they died ... unless the scribe got it wrong or I'm just thick. |
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Poems from Sam (G)
by domeair.
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Mon Oct 03, 2005 4:25 pm
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| You are choosing nice, character forming moments for your poems of Sam and Frodo, but they do little other than paint a quick vignette. I wonder, how Sam feels about the garden, the day, etc. why it's important to him etc. I'd look to see a bit more of that. |
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A Lesser and Alien Race (G)
by Marta.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 2] Warnings [n/a]
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Fri Sep 30, 2005 2:18 pm
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| Very intriguing and well written, as always! |
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