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Last Lament (G)
by Cadiliniel.
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Fri Jun 11, 2004 9:17 am
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| Interesting! You certainly paint an untraditional but, I think, appropriate, portrait of Denethor - putting hope in someone outside his family, putting his people first. Love "a whiter seat." Good job - you said everything you needed to. |
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A Light Renewed (G)
by Ania.
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Mon Jun 07, 2004 7:09 pm
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| Well done. I love that you began and ended Elrond's epiphany with Celebrian, and in between took him very convincingly through his awakening. It's nice to see Faramir so besotted, too (tee hee). |
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A Love To Die For (G)
by Eyborg.
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Sat Jun 05, 2004 3:36 pm
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Ah, Lovely ... I thought you worked in Tolkien's own phrases to great effect ("Samwise, his loyal servant" e.g.) and painted sweet and poignant portraits of both Merry and Arwen.
Also, I couldn't help but laugh appreciatively of your portrait of Merry the late night writer! Haven't we all been there? |
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Eowyn's sorrow (G)
by Vilwarin.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 7] Warnings [none]
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Sat Jun 05, 2004 9:08 am
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| Eowyn and Halbarad! How wonderful of you to see their similarities and draw them for us here. |
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Healing in Valinor (G)
by inglor.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 13]
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Mon May 31, 2004 4:26 pm
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| Lovely. |
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Lady Love an Outlaw (PG-13)
by Chathollinn.
Chapters [4]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [Part 4 of 4 is R rated]
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Mon May 31, 2004 4:17 pm
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| Excellent! You would get points for me if only for your correct use of the word 'nonplussed' but I was also delighted by your similes and wonderful turns of phrase, which sounded authentic and unique to each culture, along with your clever variance of perspective and pacing. All the elements of a great fairy tale! |
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Conflicting Wishes (G)
by Authwen.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [none]
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Mon May 31, 2004 7:41 am
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| Whew! somewhat awkwardly told, I thought, but right to the point about war - the compassion and the selfishness and the loss; things that should never be forgotten or pushed aside. |
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Bedside Chatter (G)
by SilverMoonLady.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 11]
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Tue May 18, 2004 8:23 am
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This was wonderful; poignant and humorous at the same time. And, in another balancing act, you had Pippin show his maturity while Eomer showed his youthfulness, I thought. Well done!
I heard one funny note, though: not sure Pippin would say 'aught' - 'no one will say aught.' |
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Out Of Stone (G)
by LadyAranel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 10]
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Mon May 17, 2004 7:15 am
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| Very nice! I thought you caught the characters very well, and added some terrificly well-imagined details all your own. |
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Candlelit Conversation (G)
by Hathor.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 9] Warnings [None]
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Wed May 12, 2004 6:55 am
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| Excellent! this clandestine conversation caught me completely by surprise. I never would have imagined a meeting between these two happening in this way but once I started reading your words made me think it entirely plausible and real. You did a great job capturing Pippin - his kindness, pride, gratitude and love all together; and Eowyn I felt was very true to the book - terse and so expressive. With very few words you caught her feelings on life, war and Aragorn. Very Well Done! |
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